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TOEFL iBT Independent Writing 1) Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. 2) Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? - rewrite -

Writing Topic A

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

 

 

Lets think

1)    Is it important to learn a foreign language?

2)    If so, is it good for children to start learning it as soon as they start school?

 

Ideas and Expressions

About language learning

1.    In today’s world, where English is the de facto lingua franca, it is necessary to be able to have a command of the language to live a better life.

2.    It is good to be able to know as many languages as possible to have multiple views and to be tolerant to other peoples.

3.    The important thing is to establish your own style or acquire a specific skill or knowledge, and language ability is not always relevant to it. Interpreters and translators can help you with your communication if necessary.

4.    It is important to focus on completing the mother tongue acquisition to be mature enough in one’s own society and to preserve one’s culture.

 

About early language education

1.    The earlier the start, the better the language acquisition will be. Children have fewer barriers against foreign languages, so it is easy for them to learn it.

2.    Learning the basics of a foreign language at an early stage of life will make learning higher levels of the language easy.

3.    Most of the brain network is completed by the time one turns 6 years old. This means that children learn the language as a foreign language. The class could be a burden for some.

4.    Learning two languages at a time may lead to insufficient acquisition of both and minds that are ready to be satisfied with superficial understanding of anything.

 

Sample Essay Structure

A.      IntroductionConsidering that the real command of English is necessary in today’s world, I agree with the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.

About foreign language learningMany parts of the world are getting multinational, so it is better to be able to speak English.

About when one should start learning a foreign languageTo become a bilingual, one should be exposed to the language intensively before they become a teenager.

My opinionYoung children are better learners of a foreign language than older children, especially in terms of pronunciation.

ConclusionEnglish should be introduced on starting school in today’s world.

 

B.      IntroductionI do not think it is necessary for everyone to begin learning a foreign language when they enter the elementary school.

Point 1Elementary schools are supposed to teach children what is necessary in social life, and a foreign language is not one of them.

Point 2Young children should spend more time reading books in their own language.

Counterargument-treatmentSome people will need to use foreign language at work in the future, but machines and interpreters will take care of the language barrier problem.

ConclusionThere are more important things that children should learn at primary school than a foreign language.

 

Your Sample Essay Structure

Introduction

Point 1

Point 2

Point 3

Conclusion

 

Speech Time

Make a one-minute speech on this topic.

 

Sample Paragraph Development

Main IdeaYoung children should spend more time reading books in their own language than learning a foreign language.

Supporting Detail (in general)They need to develop high capacity to think, and this is done through their mother tongue.

Supporting Detail (specific)People with low reading abilities have been increasing lately. This could be part of the causes of social problems such as online bullying and hate speech. They often happen as a result of inability to grasp the meaning of a statement in context, as well as lack of imagination and flexibility in thought. Moreover, the meanness of the culprits indicates retarded and/or perverted mental development, which is closely related to the low level of their mother tongue. High suicide rates of the young might also be related not only to insufficient general knowledge and common sense but also to weak thinking power, or weak mother tongue. Probably, overall relationships of the young are poorer than before because of this decline of the first language ability.

Follow-upLearning a foreign language is also good for the development of mind as it widens views, but this can be done during teenage years, when mind starts to be sensitive to new ideas.

Conclusion What is necessary for young children is developing their cognitive ability, which will be the base of higher levels of studies, and time should be spent for the purpose rather than a foreign language.

 

Your Sample Paragraph Development:

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Conclusion                                                                                      

                                                                                                   

 

Comments or Suggestion from your partner or group members

                                                                                                     

               

                                                                                     

                                                                                                     

 

 

 

 

 

Writing Topic B

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.

 

 

Lets think

1.      Share reasons why you are always in a hurry or prefer to take time with those who have the same preference as yours.

 

2.      Ask questions of those who have the opposite preference in how much time you take to get things done. For example, you can say, “Don’t you think that being always in a hurry is kind of jittery or uncool?” or “Isn’t that kind of lazy?”

 

Essay for Ideas and Expressions  (Barrons, Writing for the TOEFL iBT, pp. 278)

Life is short. Haste makes waste. What’s your hurry? These three sayings characterize the way I manage my day-to-day chores. I don’t want to rush through things; I prefer to take my time.

 

Life is short. You never know what may happen tomorrow, so it is important to enjoy today. By doing just a few things slowly and doing them well, you can savor the experience. You can truly enjoy what you are doing.

 

Haste makes waste. We are not machines. We can’t just rush through our chores. If we do, we might forget something. We might take shortcuts and do a poor job. Then we’ll have to do the job all over again. That certainly doesn’t save us any time. By going more slowly, we can do a chore carefully, completely, and correctly.

 

What’s your hurry? Where’s the fire? I don’t see any need to rush to the next experience. There’s still a lot to see and learn from the chores around you. Taking care of your baby brother, for instance, can be very rewarding. If you are in a hurry to get many things done, you can just keep the baby near you while you work on other chores. Or, you could devote your whole attention to him and observe his reactions to the environment. You can’t observe carefully if you are rushing to do other things at the same time.

 

To twist a common saying, “Don’t just do something, sit there!” Take life easy and savor each minute. Life is shorter than you think.

 

 

Your Sample Essay Structure

Introduction

Point 1

Point 2

Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment

Conclusion

 

Speech Time

Make a one-minute speech on this topic.

 

Sample Paragraph Development

A.      Main Idea Do not do today what you can do tomorrow.

Supporting Detail (in general) Things change, and doing things a little too early will often turn out to be just a waste of time, while time is life, as the author of Momo says.

Supporting Detail (specific) For example, even if you study the next two chapters before the class, your teacher might actually digress and would not even finish one chapter.

Follow-upAlthough the extra preparation is not a waste because you can use it later, you could have used the time for something you could have done only on that day, such as spending time with your family and friends. Textbooks will not change, but you and your folks change day by day.

Conclusion Tomorrow will be a totally new day full of the unpredictable, while today will never come back. All you need to do is make the most out of what you have today.

 

B.        Main Idea Make hay while the sun shines.

Supporting Detail (in general) Hesitation or procrastination must not ruin my life.

Supporting Detail (specific) If I think of doing something and do not do it, thinking now is not the time for it, or I could do it later, I will never do it and regret not doing it in most cases.

Follow-upOf course, there are things that need time and careful attention like friendship, and I do not hurry in dealing with them. In terms of all the other things, however, waiting makes no sense.

ConclusionTaking my time often costs me my precious moments of life, and I do not want to miss them.

 

Your Sample Paragraph Development:

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Follow-up                                                                                       

                          

 

                                                                         

                                                                                                   

Conclusion                                                                                      

                                                                                                   

 

Comments or Suggestion from your partner or group members

                                                                                                     

                                                                                                 


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