2014年9月27日土曜日

早稲田国際教養学部AO, 1812 -rewrite-

資料(年表)を使って答える問題です。数年前から図表や報告書の一部など明らかに資料だと認識できるマテリアルが出題されるようになりました。また、記事を取り上げた問題でも、その情報を用いて推論や判断を求める問が含まれることがあります。与えられた材料と自分の知っている事実を総合して現実認識や世の中の変化を予測する力を示すことのできる問題です。今回の問題の問3(200年前のリストのどの出来事が現代社会に最も大きな影響を与えていると思いますか?)を解くにあたってはEric Hofferというアメリカ人の哲学者の「歴史を学びたければ現在を見ればよい」という言葉が参考になるのではないかと思います。現代社会は歴史の積み重ねの結果として存在します。ですから現代社会の特徴の原因は過去の出来事にたどることができます。問3は現代社会の特徴を問う問題ととらえなおし、そのもととなるものに関連した事象を資料のなかで探すと見えてくるものがあるかもしれない問題だとも言えるのではないかと思います。ちなみに参考資料の著者Howard Zinnは名もない人々や権力の不正に異議を唱えた人々の視点からアメリカの歴史を捉えなおした学者で、現代言語学を確立し哲学・社会学の分野でも大きな功績のあるNoam Chomskyの親友だった人です。


解答のポイント
主題 200年前のヨーロッパと新大陸の状況及びアメリカのカナダ侵略200周年

問題文訳 以下のヨーロッパとアメリカ大陸における1812年(ちょうど200年前)の出来事のリストを見て、下の問いに答えてください。

リストをみて分かること 
先ずリストの年が1812年すなわち19世紀初頭であることから、リストアップされた出来事は世界史では帝国主義の時代の出来事であることが分かる。ざっと大きな出来事を拾ってみると、戦争と大災害に関する記述が多い。
更にもう少しよく見ると、学校で習った世界史の基礎知識に照らして違和感のある記述があることが分かる。すなわち、7月11日のアメリカのカナダ侵略の記録である。通常の世界史の知識では、帝国主義はヨーロッパの大国(このリストではイギリスとフランス)の歴史であって、アメリカは自由民主主義の擁護者として帝国主義反対の立場をとり、第1次・第2次世界大戦、冷戦時代を経て現在までこの主義を貫いていることになっているので、”US invades Canada”の記述はこの通念に合わない。平たく言えば、「アメリカがカナダを侵略したなんて歴史の教科書に載っていなかった気がする。」ということだ。この記述に基づくと、アメリカは当時、イギリスやフランス同様、自国に攻撃を仕掛けていない他国に攻め入るという帝国主義行動をとっていたことになる。

問1 リストによれば以下の各記述は正しいでしょうか、間違っているでしょうか?
別紙参照

問2 アメリカ合衆国が国力と科学技術の点において当時成長発展しつつあったということを示すのはどの出来事でしょうか?少なくとも二つの出来事を選び、それらについて解答欄に提供された箇所に英語で述べてください。
別紙参照

問3 あなたの意見では、200年前のリストのどの出来事が現代社会に最も大きな影響を与えていると思いますか?理由は何ですか?解答欄に提供された箇所に英語で答えてください。

考え方
 1)「現代社会に最も大きな影響を与えている出来事」なので、現代社会の特徴につながりのある事項を探してみる。
   現代社会の特徴のひとつに、「アメリカの戦争と拡大」がある。現代のアメリカは、他国を併合することはないが、アメリカを攻撃していない国を攻撃し、アメリカの政治・経済活動に有利な状況を確保するということを繰り返している。(例:ベトナム戦争、イラク戦争など) この起源になるような動きがリストにないか探してみる。
 2)歴史的背景と他の問いも参考にしてみる。
  このリストは帝国主義時代の欧米の出来事であり、その中に、「アメリカのカナダ侵略」という歴史的事実が含まれている。さらに、問1の選択肢e 「1812年の戦いはカナダを巻き込んだ。」は、アメリカが6月18日にイギリスに宣戦布告した3週間後の7月11日にはイギリス統治下のカナダに侵略戦争を仕掛けたことを示し、問2ではアメリカの成長発展を示唆する出来事が少なくとも2件以上リストにあることを示している。
1)と2)から、当時発展しつつあったアメリカの帝国主義的傾向に着目して”Jul 11th  US invades Canada”(711日 アメリカ、カナダを侵略)を取り上げ、カナダ侵略失敗後のアメリカのメキシコ・太平洋方面への進出、さらに第1次世界大戦後、世界最強の国となってから現代まで、自由民主主義の導入と抱き合わせに自由貿易とアメリカ優位の経済圏拡大を武力によって推し進めてきた歴史を中心に解答してみる。

Ideas and Expressions
I think the US invasion into Canada on July 11 has had the greatest influence on the modern society. This event, though failed, can be called the first step toward the imperialistic behavior of today’s America.
The US expansion into Mexico and the Pacific area, to Hawaii, the Philippines, and Japan, for example, occurred a few decades after this event. The United States won half of Mexico in 1848 after a bloody war, forced Japan to agree to unequal treaties by threatening them with warships in 1853, and annexed Hawaii, after the pineapple plantation company Dole had established itself there, in 1898. In the Philippine-American War (1899-1902), thousands of Filipino died, which was severely condemned by Mark Twain. During WWI, US posed a neutral stance till the last minute, taking the stand against the imperialism, but actually it kept supporting the British Empire secretly from the beginning.
After replacing Britain to become the most powerful country in the world, United States has acted and still acting as an empire by waging wars against countries that did not attack it but that are located in the area of geopolitical importance or have a lot of resources crucial to its economic development. For example, the Pentagon Paper revealed that the United States intentionally expanded Vietnam War by bombing unrelated areas in Vietnam and its neighboring countries close to China and the Soviet Union during the Cold War. Also, it is now clear with enough evidence that the United States invaded Iraq in 2003 for oil, fabricating a lie that Iraq had weapons of mass destruction. These wars left Vietnam and Iraq with not only huge death tolls but also deformed newborns supposedly as a result of the US use of defoliant and depleted uranium in bombs respectively.
The purchase of Louisiana could be significant in terms of doubling the US territory and bordering Mexico, which gave chances for the US to provoke the neighbor. However, the size and position does not have to do with aggressiveness of a country. A large country bordering another country like Canada has been relatively pacific in diplomacy, and a small island country like Japan was very aggressive in the past. Attacking by force a country which has not attacked it shows the country’s militaristic tendency. The invasion of Canada shows that the US was no less imperialistic than European powers in those days, and this characteristic remains basically unchanged.
By invading Canada in 1812, the US government officially crossed the line between a country of “freedom and democracy” and a system to increase and keep its sphere of influence often by force at the expense of life and the environment, and marched toward the southwest and the Pacific area to make today’s geopolitical map.

For Reference:
Excerpts from A People’s History of the United States

Chapter 8
We Take Nothing by conquest, Thank God
… Jefferson’s Louisiana Purchase had doubled the territory of the United States, extending it to the Rocky Mountains. To the south west was Mexico, which had won its independence in a revolutionary war against Spain in 1821. Mexico was then an even larger country than it is now, since it included what are now Texas, New Mexico, Utah, Nevada, Arizona, California, and part of Colorado. After agitation, and aid from the United States, Texas broke off from Mexico in 1836 and declared itself the “Lone Star Republic.” In 1845, the U.S. Congress brought it into the Union as a state.
  In the White House now was James Polk, a Democrat, an expansionist, who, on the night of his inauguration, confided to his secretary of the navy that one of his main objectives was the acquisition of California….
  …..
  Ordering troops to the Rio Grande, into territory inhabited by Mexicans, was clearly a provocation. Taylor’s army marched in parallel columns across the open prairie, scouts far ahead and on the flanks, a train of supplies following. Then, along a narrow road, through a belt of thick chaparral, they arrived, March 28, 1846, in cultivated fields and thatched-roof huts hurriedly abandoned by the Mexican occupants, who had fled across the river to the city of Matamoros. Taylor set up camp, began construction of a fort, and implanted his cannons facing the white houses of Matamoros, whose inhabitants stared curiously at the sight of an army on the banks of a quiet river.
…..
The Mexicans had fired the first shot, But they had done what the American government wanted, according to Colonel Hitchcock, who wrote in his diary, even before those first incidents:
I have said from the first that the United States are the aggressors…. We have not one particle of right to be here….. It looks as if the government sent a small force on purpose to bring on a war, so as to have a pretext for taking California and as much of this country as it chooses…. My heart is not in this business… but, as a military man, I am bound to execute orders.
  On May 9, before news of any battles, Polk was suggesting to his cabinet a declaration of war. ….
……
  Accompanying all this aggressiveness was the idea that the United States would be giving the blessings of liberty and democracy to more people. This was intermingled with ideas of racial superiority, longings for the beautiful lands of New Mexico and California, and thoughts of commercial enterprise across the Pacific. The New York Herald said, in 1847: The universal Yankee nation can regenerate and disenthrall the people of Mexico in a few years; and we believe it is a part of our destiny to civilize that beautiful country.”
  ….
The American Anti-Slavery Society, on the other hand, said the war was “waged solely for the detestable and horrible purpose of extending and perpetuating American slavery throughout the vast territory of Mexico.” …..
  ….
  It is impossible to know the extent of popular support of the war. But there is evidence that many organized working men opposed the war. There were demonstrations of Irish workers in New York, Boston, and Lowell against the annexation of Texas. In May, when the war against Mexico began, New York workingmen called a meeting to oppose the war, and many Irish workers came. The meeting called the war a plot by slave owners and asked for the withdrawal of American troops from disputed territory.
  ….
  Meanwhile, by land and by sea, Anglo-American forces were moving into California. A young naval officer, after the long voyage around the southern cape of South America, and up the coast to Monterey in California, wrote in his diary:
Asia… will be brought to our very doors. Population will flow into the fertile regions of California. The resources of the entire country…will be developed….. The public lands lying along the routeof railroadswill be changed from deserts into gardens, and a large population will be settled….
….
  Mexico surrendered. There were calls among Americans to take all of Mexico. The Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo, signed February 1848, just took half. The Texas boundary was set at the Rio Grande; New Mexico and California were ceded. The United States paid Mexico $15 million, which led the Whig Intelligencer to conclude that “we take nothing by conquest…. Thank God.”


Chapter 12
The Empire and the People
Theodore Roosevelt wrote to a friend in the year 1897: “In strict confidence … I should welcome almost any war, for I think this country needs one.”
  The year of the massacre at Wounded Knee, 1890, it was officially declared by the Bureau of the Census that the internal frontier was closed. The profit system, with its natural tendency for expansion, had already begun to look overseas. The severe depression that began in 1893 strengthened an idea developing within the political and financial elite of the country: that overseas markets for American foods might relieve the problem of under consumption at home and prevent the economic crises that in the 1800s brought class war.
  ….
  Expansion overseas was not a new idea. Even before the war against Mexico carried the United States to the Pacific, the Monroe Doctrine looked south ward into and beyond the Caribbean. Issued in 1823 when the countries of Latin America were winning independence from Spanish control, it made plain to European nations that the United States considered Latin America is sphere of influence. Not long after, some American began thinking into the Pacific: of Hawaii, Japan, and the great markets of China.
  There was more than thinking. A State Department list of 1962 (presented to a Senate committee to cite precedents for the use of armed force against Cuba) shows 103 interventions in the affairs of other countries between 1798 and 1895. A sampling form the listed, with the exact description given by the State Departments:
  1852-53Argentina
Marines were landed and maintained in Buenos Aires to protect American interests during a revolution.
1853Nicaragua
To protect American lives and interests during political disturbances.
1853-54Japan
The “Opening of Japan” and the Perry Expedition.The State Department does not give details, but this involved the use of warships to force Japan to open its ports to the United States.
1853-54Ryukyu and Bonin Islands
Commodore Perry on three visits before going to Japan and while waiting for a reply from Japan made a naval demonstration, landing marines twice, and secured a coaling concession from the ruler of Naha on Okinawa. He also demonstrated in the Bonin Islands. All to secure facilities for commerce.
1854Nicaragua
San Juan del Norte Greytown was destroyed to avenge an insult to the American Minister to Nicaragua.
1855Uruguay
U.S. and European naval forces landed to protect American interests during an attempted revolution in Montevideo.
1859China
For the protection of American interests in Shanghai.
1860Angola, Portuguese West Africa
To protect American lives and property at Kissembo when the natives became troublesome.
1893Hawaii
Ostensibly to protect American lives and property; actually to promote a provisional government under Sanford B. Dole. This action was disavowed by the United States.
1894Nicaragua
To protect American interests at Blufields following a revolution.

Thus, by the 1890s, there had been much experience in overseas probes and interventions. The ideology of expansion was widespread in the upper circles of military men, politicians, businessmenand even among some of the leaders of farmers’ movements who thought foreign markets would help them.

  ….Senator Henry Cabot Lodge of Massachusetts wrote in a magazine article:

   For the sake of our commercial supremacy in the Pacific we should control the Hawaiian islands…and when the Nicaraguan canal is built, the island of Cuba…will become a necessity…. The great nations are rapidly absorbing for their future expansion and their present defense all the waste places of the earth. It is a movement which makes for civilization and the advancement of the race. As one of the great nations of the world the United States must not fall out of the line of march.

早稲田国際教養学部AO, reference, China, Africa and Implications for the United States


China, Africa and Implications for the United States

  INTERNATIONAL POLICY DIGEST

2014年9月26日金曜日

TOEFL iBT, Independent Writing, Change or Stability? -rewrite-

Writing Topic
There are some people who like adventure and new experiences. They are not afraid to take risks, and they enjoy change in their lives. Other people prefer stable and predictable lifestyles. They do not often change their habits, and they value safety. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

Let’s think
This writing topic has three parts: 1) premises  2) a direction 3) a question.
1)    Premises: Introduction of two types of approaches to life: adventurous or safety-oriented.
2)    The direction: You are required to deal with both types and compare them.
3)    The question: The question is about your “preference” not “objective judgment.” Therefore, you can be subjective as well as objective when you make your choice.

In reality, an individual’s life is usually a mixture of both approaches. You try to protect what you have while you sometimes want change. Thus to not choose and to explain why you do not might be a way to answer a choice question while committing either would make the essay more interesting as this writing topic can be interpreted as a question about your view of life. Answering this type of question is like answering a friend’s question about your choice between a free bird and a pet dog as your reincarnation. You are expected to show what kind of person you are by your choice.

It might be a help to think of a specific choice like one between studying abroad and accepting a job you liked during the internship. Studying abroad would be exciting. You would meet new people with various backgrounds and visit many places as well as advancing your academic background but there is no guarantee that you can get a good job when you come home. You might lose contact with many of your friends and acquaintances. On the other hand, accepting the job promises stability of your life. You can make plans for the future, save money for retirement, and spend extra money to enjoy life. You can build long-lasting good relationships with the people in your company while maintaining relationships you already have. However, as is often the case, you might feel a little bored with the predictable nature of your life. You may regret that you did not take the chance twenty years from now.

Hints for points
Adventurous approach to life: varieties of experiences, encounters with many different kinds of people, strong interest in new things, life full of excitement and surprise, introducing new things into society, making unexpected discoveries, flexible, tolerant toward different ideas and tastes, progressive, often misunderstood by others, full of danger and loss, “A rolling stone gathers no moss.”

Safety-oriented approach to life: safe and peaceful life, focused on protecting the environment they are in, know one thing/person really well, skeptical of new things, can miss opportunities, old-fashioned, can be considered boring, cannot adapt to inevitable changes, You cannot say that you are really living if you keep avoiding new things: “Life begins at the end of your comfort zone.” (Neale Donald Walsch)

Decisive reason for your preference: way of life (offensive / defensive), character (active / passive), role model (family member, the person you admire, famous people)


One-paragraph essay
Sample 1
Introduction = Main Idea = OutlineI welcome changes by nature.
Adventurous approach to lifeAdventurous life is exciting but involves taking risks.
Safety-oriented approach to lifeLiving cautiously and steadily is wise but it could leave you behind time.
Your preferenceAs for me, changes and adventure make me feel alive.
Conclusion = Wrap-upAppreciating changes would help make life more enjoyable.

Sample 2
Introduction = Main Idea = OutlineOrdinary life is what is most precious in today’s world.
Reason 1I am an average individual who is happy to follow others.
Reason 2Today’s world can throw you into a precarious life easily.
About the other choice and my view about itSometimes I have an itch for changes, but I do not think following the desire is wise. Also, there are many ways to pacify such urges.
Conclusion = Wrap-upConsidering the circumstance I am in, I would not take a risk.


Your essay structure notes
Form 1
Introduction = Main Idea = Outline

Adventurous approach to life


Safety-oriented approach to life


Your preference


Conclusion = Wrap-up


Form 2
Introduction = Main Idea = Outline

Reason 1


Reason 2


About the other choice and my view about it


Conclusion = Wrap-up





Essay for ideas and expressions
It is true that some people have a more positive attitude toward change and anticipation of danger than others, who put more effort into maintaining what they already have. I think both are reasonable approaches to life, but I consider myself more on the side of the former because I cannot help trying something new by nature.

Adventurous people approach changes like a child spotting a new ride in an amusement park. They want to get the most out of life and feel that staying the same is the end of life. They are usually very interesting people and have the strength and grace of a person who has dared to take risks. They often bring about change to society. Entrepreneurs, explorers and probably the first humans who used fire are people of this kind. They contribute to evolution and revolution.

People who stick to their habits and value safety and stability can avoid big mistakes and embarrassment. They never gamble and lose money. They never stand out and become a target of bullying. These people are keenly aware of the negative effects of changes and human weakness―well-intentioned new attempts often go awry like the failure of communism in Russia. Their priority is to protect what has been proved secure and beneficial. They help retain culture and tradition.

Of course there are drawbacks in both approaches to life. Adventurous people often face great dangers and losses like bankruptcy or death, while safety-oriented people tend to lose opportunities, for luck and fun are often in the new and strange. In either case, whether you feel that you are really alive with the approach or not might count, and it seems to depend on personalities. Some find true joy of life in peaceful and warm everyday life, others feel alive only when facing something novel.

As for me, changes and adventure make me feel alive. I become full of energy and enthusiasm when changes come to my life and repetition makes me start thinking about something else. A new job always makes me focused and when I have established the routine of the work, I cannot stand following it and before I know I alter some part of it. I enjoy seeing more and more foreigners coming into my country just because they are people I am not familiar with, and I am all for new ideas and systems if I find them fundamentally good. In fact, if I could, I would keep traveling around the world or working for new projects of good causes.


Nothing stays the same forever. The essence of life is change. Then appreciating changes, rather than fearing or just accepting them, would help make life more enjoyable. Taking one step further and risking one’s existence in something for a good purpose, no matter how tiny an experiment it might be, will open the door to a meaningful moment of life. 

2014年9月22日月曜日

TOEFL iBT, Independent Writing, Should smoking stay legal? -rewrite-

Writing Topic
Some people think that smoking cigarettes should become illegal, since it provides little benefit and a great deal of health risk, others feel that individuals should be free to smoke cigarettes if they choose to do so. Do you think cigarette smoking should be stopped by making it illegal or should it remain legal?

Writing Topic with hints
The question itself is simple: Should cigarette smoking be illegal or not? However, before the question, this topic has hints for you to consider. You could either discuss the topic focusing on the hints or add your own view point, although it might not be wise to entirely ignore the point of the hints. In this topic, the point of the hints is the choice between prioritizing individuals’ health and respecting freedom and personal responsibility. In other words, this question can be translated as follows: Should cigarette smoking be illegal to protect one’s health or legal to respect one’s freedom and personal responsibility?

Hints for points
♦Cigarette smoking should be illegal because …
1. it is toxic and causes cancer and other serious diseases.
2. it is addictive.
3. there is the problem of second-hand smoke/smoking.
- Counterarguments: 1) There are measures to take to prevent second-hand smoke such as separate-smoking and ban on smoking in public areas. (Smoking will remain legal while smoking in certain areas will be illegal.) These measures are not practical because there are many smokers who do not comply with the rules and you cannot catch or shut up smoke completely. 2) Banning smoking will undermine the economy. Some estimate shows that the smoking related loss, mainly medical costs, surpasses the loss caused by tobacco ban. Even though the estimate is not flawless given other factors such as unhealthy lifestyle and environmental pollution, it is intuitively convincing, since fixing something costs more than destroying it in general.
- Conclusion: To protect public health, individual freedom can be limited.

♦Cigarette smoking should not be illegal because …
1. you have the right to do whatever you want to do even if it endangers your health.
2. other dangerous things such as alcoholic drinks or mountain climbing are not illegal. Also, there are things of indulgence that we do not like or that are not good but requires tolerance, for example, food with strong odor, death metal, saggy pants, or binge drinking.
3. smoking is a necessary evil like drinking and gambling because
a) it helps smokers release stress
b) it is an established part of economy. If cigarettes are banned, the economy will be affected. e.g the tobacco industry, coffee shops, music clubs, etc. and tax revenue (1 trillion yen in 2009 to 23 billion yen in 2010: 63% decrease after tobacco tax raise) Cigarette industry would go underground if banned. As in the case of cannabis, making it available to the public will reduce the number of addicts and dealers.
- Counterarguments: 1) Secondhand smoke harms other people. Only public smoking should be banned.  2) Tobacco ban will protect the young.  Many young people are attracted to things banned by the authorities. If smoking stays legal, most young people will choose not to smoke through informed decision or after experimenting with it a little.
- Conclusion: As long as measures are taken to prevent second-hand smoking, the choice between health and fun should be left to each individual.


One-paragraph essay = the framework of the full essay
Now let’s write a one-paragraph essay so that you can use it as a framework of your full essay.
Sample one-paragraph essay 1
This essay is based on the first idea of the writing topic.
Main Idea = OutlineCigarettes should be made illegal to protect younger generations and to solve the problem of passive smoking.
Reason 1Smoking harms one’s health badly.
Reason 2The number of those who start smoking can be greatly reduced.
Counterargument & Counter-counterargumentIt is true that individuals have the right to choose to do what they want to do, even potentially dangerous things, but smoking harm other individuals and should be restricted to protect the public good.
Conclusion = Wrap-upI am convinced that cigarette smoking should be banned because it will improve public health, especially that of the next generation.

Sample one-paragraph essay 2
This essay is based on the second idea of the writing topic.
Main Idea = OutlineIt is more dangerous to ban smoking than to make public totally smoke-free.
Reason 1Smoking ban would harm democracy.
Reason 2Making smoking illegal would just stir the society.
Counterargument & Counter-counterargumentIt is true that smoking provides little benefit and a great deal of health risk. However, the government should not force people a lifestyle, even though it can recommend it. Also, there are measures to protect other individuals from secondhand smoke.
Conclusion = Wrap-upEven though objectively it does no good, smoking should stay legal.


Your one-paragraph essay:
Main Idea = OutlineI agree/disagree with --- because …


Reason 1


Reason 2


Counterargument & Counter-counterargument


Conclusion = Wrap-up



Note: A counterargument is a rebuttal that can be easily expected. While writing an essay, sometimes you ask yourself, “Well, but what about this case? My point is vulnerable to it.” Then this “this case” is the counterargument. Hitting a counterargument is a chance to grade up your essay because you have found an untied end of a rope (your logic). If you can tie it well, you can confirm your point, making your essay more persuasive. Thus, taking up a counterargument when necessary is important to get a higher score. You can deal with a counterargument in an appropriate part of a paragraph or use a whole paragraph to deal with it



Essay for Ideas and Expressions
A heavy smoker’s family loses him twice. Long before he dies of a disease which seems to be related to this unhealthy habit of his, when they realize that they are helpless in making him quit smoking, they start a silent but desperate mourning of his early death. It is the same sadness that they share with families of drug addicts. It is the sadness of seeing him die day by day. Still, this is actually a minor aspect of the tragedy of tobacco. Even though it might be difficult to put in practice because of smokers’ feelings and economic circumstances, cigarettes should be made illegal to protect younger generations and to solve the problem of second-hand smoke.

By making smoking illegal, the number of those who start smoking can be greatly reduced. Smokers find it difficult, and many of them believe it unnecessary, to quit smoking even though it has been scientifically proved that smoking causes lung cancer and other diseases. This is because smoking is addictive. When some toxic substance is addictive, making it illegal is one of the effective ways to reduce its harm. This is especially effective in preventing those who are not addicted, mostly the young, from initiating the use, since people usually stay away from things that are illegal.

Smoking seems to be a necessary evil and a matter of self-responsibility just like drinking and gambling, but the problem of second-hand smoke separates it from other indulgences. Cigarette smoke directly harms those who are around the smoker. Children of smokers are more susceptible to respiratory diseases than those of non-smokers, and many people are sensitive to smoke. Although separate-smoking and public smoking ban are promoted, many smokers do not conform to the rules and it is impossible to block the contaminated air completely. When some toxic fumes are around in everyday scenes, it is natural for the government to regulate them.

Banning smoking is difficult but possible. It seems that cigarettes stay legal because their social influence is not as big as that of drugs and they support the economy. Cigarettes do not make the user dangerous the way drugs do and smokers can keep functioning for decades. Also, the cigarette industry is an established part of economy and produce tax money, so that it is very difficult to terminate it. However, efforts toward changes necessary for public health have been made in the past. Coal was replaced by oil, which is cleaner than coal, and now oil is being replaced by much cleaner energy sources. Cigarettes themselves were a replacement, advocated by the government, for chewing tobacco, which was found to be contributing to the transmission of tuberculosis through saliva spat on the ground by the users. When the public health is at risk, the government should and can take measures.


Society is ultimately to be totally smoke-free to protect the health of citizens, especially younger generations, although care should be taken for smokers and those involved in the industry.