2026年10月25日日曜日

TOEFL iBT A large company or a small company? (Revised)

Which do you prefer to work for, a large company or a small company? (Sociology)

 

 

 

☆Let’s Think

1.        What are the disadvantages of a large company? What about those of a small company?

2.        Why do you work? Do you work only for money? What do you want in life and how your job relates to it?

 

Note: Purposes of working are as follows: escape from precarious life, social contribution, independence, full-filling family life, hobbies, personal growth, experience, health, stability, excitement, etc.

 

                                                                                                                 

☆Hints for Points

The following ideas about the advantages and disadvantages of a large company and a small company are taken from the website of Lifehacker.

 

The Advantages of a Big Company

You Have More Obvious Structure

When you enter a large company, you're taking part in a machine that's been around for a long time. As such, there is typically an established way of doing things. As soon as you walk in, you will know what your job is, how you fit into your department and over time you'll even learn the obvious pathways for promotions.

 

The Benefits Packages Are Better

Larger companies, in general, are better about providing benefits like health insurance or retirement plans. The smaller a corporation's revenue is, the less likely it can afford to pay for benefits.

 

You Can Switch Job Without Leaving

Large companies need a lot of people working a wide variety of jobs to operate. While your specific role may be specialized, it's possible to change positions and explore a new area without leaving the company.

 

The Problems at a Big Company

Changes Happen Slowly

Shaking things up at a big company can take a lot of time. Even if your company is open to new ideas, getting your department to move to a new model or create a product can take a lot of time.

 

You Won't Know Some Coworkers

No matter how social or friendly you are, if you work in a company with hundreds or even thousands of employees, it will be impossible to know everyone. Inevitably, some aspect of your job will be affected by someone you've never met. It may be the CEO, the head of payroll, or the legal department, but someone will make a decision that determines how you work and it may be difficult or even impossible to speak to that person directly.

 

Your Fulfillment Can Be Determined by Your Surroundings

A related problem is that your success and happiness can be determined by where you are placed within the company. Working with a dysfunctional group can bring down the quality of your work, despite your best efforts. It may even affect your ability to move up in the company.

 

The Advantages of a Small Company

Your Success is Visible

Unless you work near the top, accomplishing something significant at a large company will probably never reach the ears of the CEO. At a small company, however, great work can be seen by everyone. This makes it easier to distinguish yourself with certain skills. Your actions are also more significant.

 

Your Company is More Agile

Being able to work closely with all of your coworkers doesn't just mean they can see you. You also have access to a lot more of the company's moving parts. Being able to speak directly to your upper management and voice concerns or pitch ideas can result in much faster movement. What may take days or weeks of submission and approval processes at a big company may take knocking on your boss's door at a small one.

 

Your Responsibilities May be More Varied

In a smaller company, you may be required to exercise a different skill set without leaving your desk. Especially in a startup environment, you may be called on to fulfill more roles outside a narrowly-defined job description. One day you're working in Photoshop, the next you're diagnosing PC problems, and by Friday you're updating the company website. If you like using a variety of skills without changing jobs, a smaller company may be more suited to you.

 

The Problems at a Small Company

Your Failure is Visible

When you make a mistake. Obviously, a good employee would want to minimize failure regardless of who can see, but it never feels good when the majority of your coworkers all know when you've made a mistake.

 

The Benefits Package Are Smaller

As stated earlier, smaller companies typically don't have as extensive of a benefits package as larger companies.

 

There May Be No Legal or HR Departments

Small companies often don't get around to setting up things like legal or human resources departments until they've been established for a while.

 

 

 ☆Sample Answers for Ideas and Expressions

Sample A

【Main Idea】My morale will be higher if I work for a small company.

【Supporting Details】By working in a small company, I can see the whole operation of the company. I can hear the president making a phone call to a client or talking with the vice president. Then I can learn how the business is going or what will happen to a particular project. In a big company, I work in a small team, which is divided into individual cubicles. My boss may explain how our job is related to the whole operation of the company, but it is difficult to feel that I am part of it. Compared to that isolating environment, sense of belonging is stronger in a small company, and this will be a great incentive for me to work hard.

【Counterargument-treatment】As Alex says, stability of a large company is attractive as small businesses are vulnerable to competitions and economic downturns. However, there are many established small businesses that offer good salary and benefits. I would like to look carefully and find such a company to enjoy working in an intimate and motivation environment.

【Counterargument-treatment】I consider that the quality of life depends largely on health and relationships and I believe that a small company provides me with both. (209)

 

Sample B

【Main Idea】While the dynamics of small companies is attractive, I would like to work for a large company not only for stability but also for career advancement.

【Supporting Details】A sole proprietorship is a family business. Even if the president is great, the company culture is built on the president’s philosophy, which is usually a variant or and an anomaly from the standard. It could be wonderful, but it could have problems. In the worst-case scenario, the company may have some odd rules based on the president’s personal value. For example, there are small companies assign only female workers or foreign workers to bathroom-cleaning. A large established company follows the international business culture, and thus it is freer from such discrimination. Although I don’t mind cleaning bathrooms, I would rather learn the universal business protocols and ethics by working in a big company.

【Counterargument-treatment】It is true that a small company allows you to gain experience in different areas of the business as Emma says, and this makes you resourceful. However, when it comes to changing jobs or becoming independent, career at a small firm can be disadvantageous, because the business is in such a niche that it would be difficult to find another company or make a spin-off company in the same area. On the other hand, a large company has many affiliates and subsidiaries in various industries, and thus you will experience various areas of the industry unless you stay in the same department for decades, and it makes it easier to find a new job later.

【Conclusion】All in all, I expect a large company will make me more well-rounded than a small company.

(272 words)


 

Write your draft. Then read each other’s draft, asking questions and making counterarguments.

 

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2026年10月17日土曜日

TOEFL iBT Writing for an Academic Discussion Should dancing be valued more than now? (Revised)

Which room of a house do you consider the most important? (Sociology)

 

 

 

☆Let’s Think

1.        What are the differences between the following sentences?

A.     Which room of your house do you think is the most important?

B.     Which room of a house do you think is the most important?

Note: Sentence A is about your house, while Sentence B is about a house in general.

 

2.        What functions do the following rooms have?

The living room:

 

The bedroom:

 

The kitchen/dining room:

 

3.        Why do you go home after school or work? You could eat, take a bath, sleep, communicate, and watch TV without going home. What is the purpose of going home? Even single people like to go home. What are the good things about going home other than rejoining your family?

 

 

☆Hints for Points

The living room

1.     Man is a social animal, and the living room is used for communication, bonding and socializing with family members and neighbors.

2.     It is used for important occasions like celebrations or meetings. Memories of a family are made there.

3.     Simple houses like pit houses look like a living room. This shows that the living room is the essence of a house.

4.     This room is located in the best area in a house.

5.     The most important things of the family are in the living room. (The last two are ideas of a former TOFL student.)

 

The bedroom

1.     The main function of a house is rest and relaxation.

2.     Everyone needs to be alone sometimes to release stress and get refreshed.

3.     Personal things are in the bedroom. Privacy is protected only in the bedroom.

4.     The bedroom is for deep mental activities, such as reflection, mediation, and creative activities.

 

The kitchen/dining room

1.      A house is for food storage. It is also for cooking and eating fresh and healthy food.

2.      A house is for family dinner.

 

 

☆Sample Answer for ideas and expressions

【Main Idea】Although both Grace and Daniel make good points, I think the living room is the most important in a house, because I think the main function of the living room, the role it plays as the symbol of bonding, is more important than those of the other rooms.

【Supporting Details】The living room is for activities of significance for the family. Parties, marriage celebrations, and wake and funeral gatherings are held in the living room. Visitors are invited into the living room, and family photos are usually taken in the living room.

【Follow-up】The kitchen also plays this social function as Grace describes, but the basic function of the kitchen is to provide food, and bonding is its secondary function. As for the bed room, although privacy and rest are essential in life, I think most people would choose bonding rather than solitude if they had to choose. Also, rest can be taken in the living room. Some would say that more profound events in life like emotional interactions happen in the kitchen or the bedroom. However, the living room always exists in your mind as a special place for official presentation of your attitude toward other members of your family and community. For instance, it is almost always the living room that is chosen for a serious announcement or confession.

【Conclusion】We see the living room as a sacred place in family life, and this makes it the most important room of a house.  (241 words)


Write your draft. Then read each other’s draft, asking questions and making counterarguments.

 

                                                   DRAFT