2022年5月29日日曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Voting should be mandatory. 2) All mothers should be allowed a three-year paid maternity leave.

Drill 1  Find eight differences between the two responses to the following question? Which do you think is more appropriate as an answer in a written test? Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Voting should be mandatory.

 

 Answer A: I agree. It’s a duty for a citizen living in a democracy to vote. Because, voting is the only way to directly reflect the majority opinions. For accuracy, all citizens must vote, and also, voting lets politicians know that people are watching them. Without this function, politics will deteriorate. For example, Japan. It is the low voting rates that are causing the corruption of the government in Japan. The majority party would not be so negligent if people make their voices heard. So, voting should be mandatory.


Answer B:
I agree with the statement that voting should be mandatory. It is a duty for a citizen living in a democracy to vote, because voting is the only way to directly reflect the majority opinions. For accuracy, all citizens must vote. Also, voting lets politicians know that people are watching them. Without this function, politics will deteriorate. For example, in Japan, it is the low voting rates that are causing the corruption of the government. The majority party would not be so negligent if people made their voices heard. Therefore, voting should be mandatory.

 

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following question, write a short essay on it including expressions below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All mothers should be allowed a three-year paid maternity leave.

 

● It is that … だ」【強調構文(分裂文)】

● If 過去形 , S would V … 「もし~したら...するだろう。」【仮定法過去(現在の事実の逆を仮定)】

 

Hints for Points: Child-rearing should be considered a job. If it were easy to raise children, birth rates would rise. The first three years of one’s life are crucial in one’s development.

 

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2022年5月27日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing The government should provide a national curriculum for all children up until college. - revised -

Consider the following statement. The government should provide a national curriculum for all children up until college. Do you agree with this idea? Support your response by including specific reasons and examples.

 

 

 

Let’s Think

Notes

1)  The word “should” is about ideal situations, so the discussion could be purely in theory, as in “We should not kill even for self-defense”. The word “should” also means duty, so that the focus of the discussion can be about responsibility, as in “The government should support the disadvantaged”. It also means necessity, as in “We should exercise caution in changing the whole system.”

2)  In Japan, where we live, there is a national curriculum for all children up until high school. Universities are allowed to decide what to teach by themselves.

 

1.     Read the sentences below and answer the questions.

a.     May was here up until now.  When did May leave?

b.     May was educated in Japan up until high school. Do you think May went to Japanese high school?

c.      May wants to study up until graduate school. What academic credential does May want?

 

2.     Discuss in pairs or groups what would happen if there were or were not a national curriculum at each level of education, compulsory education, high school, and college in terms of egalitarianism, freedom, and regional needs.

 

egalitarianism

freedom

regional needs

compulsory education

 

 

 

 

high school

 

 

 

 

college

 

 

 

 

 

3.     Tell your partner or group members whether you agree with the statement or not and why.

 

 

Hints for Points

Agree:

1.     It is egalitarian. All children can receive adequate general knowledge required today.

2.     Quality of education of all universities will be ensured.

3.     It will strengthen the national power. It is easy to produce a type of workforce needed by the nation.

 

Disagree:

1.     University is for autonomous studies. Students decide what they study.

2.     It will reduce freedom. Possibility of teaching will be limited.

3.     Regional needs are not reflected in a national curriculum.

4.     We need an international standard for higher level of education.

 

 

Sample Essay Structure

IntroductionI cannot entirely agree with the idea that the government should provide a national curriculum for all children up until college. College students should be free, and the existing curriculum does not seem to be working very well.

Point for AgreementA national curriculum guarantees a certain level of quality of education throughout the nation.

Reason for Disagreement 1The idea touches the problem of how much the government should control. It is also impossible for the government, or anyone, to know what university students should learn.

Reason for Disagreement 2The goodness of a national curriculum in itself is questionable.

ConclusionOn the one hand, curriculum for all up until college under the guidance of the government is egalitarian, but on the other side, it seems unnecessary and unrealistic. Therefore, I cannot totally agree with the idea.

 

【導入】政府が全ての子供たちのための大学までの国家カリキュラムを提供すべきだという考えには完全には賛成できない。学部生は自由であるべきであり既存のカリキュラムはあまりうまく機能していないように思える。

【賛成理由】国家カリキュラムは国中である水準の質の教育を保証する。

【反対理由 1】この考えは政府がどの程度管理すべきなのかという問題に触れる。また、政府あるいは誰でも学部生が何を学ぶべきかを知るのは不可能だ。

【反対理由 2】国家カリキュラムの良さ自体が疑わしい。

【結論】一方では政府指導の下の全ての人に対する大学までの国家カリキュラムは平等主義だが、他方では不要で非現実的の様に思える。従ってこの考えに完全には賛成できない。

 

 

Essay for Ideas and Expressions

As someone of humble upbringing, I think I should appreciate that my country Japan provides a unified curriculum for all up until high school, although as far as I remember, most of my real learning happened outside of school. I also believe that the officials in the ministry of education, culture, sports, science, and technology are conscientious and sincerely care about our children. However, I cannot totally agree with the idea that the government should provide a national curriculum for all children up until college. College students should be free, and the existing curriculum does not seem to be working.

覚えている限り真の学びは学校外で起こったとはいえ、私の国日本が高校まで全ての人のための統一カリキュラムを提供していることに、私は貧しい育ちの人間として感謝すべきだと思う。また、文部科学省の官僚は良心的で心から子供たちのことを思っていると信じている。しかし、政府が大学まで全ての子供たちのために国家カリキュラムを提供すべきだという考えには完全には賛成できない。学部生は自由であるべきだし既存のカリキュラムはうまくいっていないように思える。

 

A national curriculum guarantees a certain level of quality of education throughout the nation. This will partly reduce the problem of the regional difference in the quality of education. Although difference of teaching methods will remain as the cause of the educational level gap between regions seriously grappling with education and those that are not, setting the minimum requirement of the class contents will ensure that all nationals will not fail to be taught to what they should know. Therefore, it is good to have a unified curriculum for basic and intermediate levels. It might also be true with college. Most universities provide courses in the liberal arts, and usually the first half of the college years are spent on the acquisition of the introductory level knowledge of a variety of disciplines prior to or in addition to major subjects. Thus, the national standard might be useful to solve the problem of disparity in the level of college education. Also, governmental management of college curriculum can help secure tax money and faculty for necessary areas of higher education instead of having them at the mercy of corporations.

国家カリキュラムは国中である水準の教育の質を保証する。これにより教育の質における地域差の問題は部分的に減少する。教授法の違いが教育熱心な地域とそうでない地域の教育水準の差の原因として残っているとはいえ、授業内容の最低限度の要求を設定することにより全国民が知っているべき事を必ず教わることになる。従って初級と中級レベルの統一カリキュラムがあるのは良いことだ。大学でも当てはまるかもしれない。大抵の大学は一般教養科目を提供しており通常大学前半は専攻科目の前または専攻科目に加えて様々な科目の入門レベルの獲得に費やされる。従って、国家基準は大学教育の不均衡の問題を解説する役に立つかもしれない。また、大学のカリキュラムを政府が管理すれば税金と教授陣を企業の思い通りにされる代わりに必要な大学教育分野のために確保するのを助けることができる。

 

However, unified national curriculum may also have an adverse effect on the advanced level of education. First, the idea touches the problem of how much the government should control. It would be an intervention of the freedom of university. A university is supposed to provide a place for voluntary pursuit of intellectual interest. It provides a primordial environment for fact-finding and creativity. It ought to be chaotic and unpredictable, the opposite of being under a management. For example, fundamental research depends solely upon the curiosity of the researcher, and this freedom has allowed for Nobel Prize quality discoveries and inventions. If there were such a government as tries to openly control the learning of the brightest people of the country, it would be the last entity that you would like to live under.

しかし、統一国家カリキュラムはまた大学では逆効果かもしれない。まず、この考えは政府がどの程度管理すべきなのかという問題に触れる。大学の自由の侵害になるだろう。大学というものは知的関心の自発的追及のための場を提供することになっている。事実の発見と創造のための原初的環境を提供するのだ。混沌として予測不能であるはずであり、管理下にあるのと逆なのだ。例えば、基礎研究は研究者の好奇心にのみ頼っており、この自由によりノーベル賞級の発明発見が可能になる。もし、国で最も聡明な人々の学びをあからさまに管理しようとする政府があったらその下で最も住みたくない存在だろう。

 

It is also impossible for the government, or anyone, to know what college students should learn. The above-mentioned unfettered environment for study will contribute to the development and innovation of knowledge and skills. A humanities student would learn higher mathematics for fun and later become a competent manager; a student majoring in French literature would spend all four years reading all kinds of novels day and night would see the limit of the reality depicted in fiction and become an award-winning non-fiction writer of science and politics, as in the case of Takashi Tachibana; a medical student who was fascinated by Egyptology would work out a new approach to evolutionary anthropology by analyzing DNAs of old remains such as Egyptian mammies or Neanderthals as in the case of Svante Pӓӓbo; or a future leader of an IT giant company would take an Oriental calligraphy course and later draw on the skill in creating new machines, as in the well-known case of Steve Jobs. Let smart people study as they like, and something amazing would come out. It is ridiculous for the government to try to decide what college students should get out of university education.

また、政府あるいは誰でも学部生が何を学ぶべきかを知るのは不可能だ。上記の足かせのない研究環境が知識と技術の発展と革新に貢献する。文系の学生が高等数学を楽しみで学び、のちに有能な部長になるかもしれないし、立花隆の場合のように仏文科の学生が4年間全てを昼夜を問わず全ての種類の小説を読んで過ごし、フィクションにおける現実描写の限界をみて賞を取る政治科学のノンフィクションライターになるだろうし、スバンテ・ペーボのようにエジプト学に魅了された医学部生がエジプト人のミイラやネアンデルタール人のような古い遺体のDNAを分析することによって進化人類学への新しい方法を編み出すだろうし、あるいはスティーブ・ジョブズの有名な例の様にIT大企業の将来の指導者が東洋の習字コースをとり、後に新しい機械を作る時にその技術を使うだろう。賢い人に好きなように勉強させれば驚くべきものが生まれる。学部生が大学教育から何を得るかを政府が決めるのは馬鹿げている。

 

Last but not least, the goodness of a national curriculum in itself is questionable. The interests and abilities of people vary, and the unified curriculum may have nothing to do with what many young people are trying to get out of life. What education helps develop is only a fraction of human activities. The present national curriculums, for instance, seem to be the enemy of real learning. Each child is born with a great capacity, but most elementary school children seem to find few subjects attractive, and after toiling all the way up to high school, many people not only fail to acquire anything significant but also develop an inferiority complex about studies. Moreover, even those who seem to like studying will also forget most of what they learn at school in twenty years. This indicates that real learning seldom, if ever, takes place under the present curriculums. Even considering other factors such as teaching methods or the overall environment of education like poverty or the academic achievement-oriented society, bad performance may well be attributed to bad materials, the class contents. The system is not working, and the concept of national curriculum itself may need reviewing.

最後ではあるが同様に重要なのは、国家カリキュラムの良さ自体が疑わしい。人の関心や能力は様々であり、統一カリキュラムは多くの若者が人生から得ようとしているものと何の関係もないかもしれない。教育が発達させるのを助けるのは人間活動のほんのひとかけらだ。例えば現在の国のカリキュラムは真の学びの敵のように思える。子どもはひとりひとり大きな可能性を持って生まれるがほとんどの小学生はほとんどの科目が魅力的だとは思わないように思える。そして高校まで苦労した後、多くの人は何も重要なことを得られないだけでなく勉強への劣等感も持つようになる。更に、勉強が好きなように思える者たちも十年後には学校で習ったことの大半を忘れる。教授法あるいは貧困や学歴偏重社会のような全体的な教育環境などの他の要因を考慮しても悪い業績は悪い材料すなわち授業内容に原因を帰することが十分できるだろう。制度がうまくいっていないのだから国家カリキュラムの概念自体の再考が必要かもしれない。

 

A national curriculum is egalitarian and most people benefit from it. However, it is a double-edged sword. What is for everyone suits no one. It seems that at least college should be left free, but some college might perform better under governmental guidance. Therefore, I cannot make it clear whether I agree with the idea of a national curriculum for all up until college. It would be nice if there were a system with a wide range of choices that provides a core curriculum for each field with a view to helping maximum development of each individual’s ability from the elementary school to college.

国家カリキュラムは平等主義でほとんどの人は利益を得ている。しかし諸刃の剣でもある。皆のためのものは誰にも合わない。少なくとも大学は自由にさせるべきである様に思えるが、政府の指導の下でよりよい仕事をする大学もあるかもしれない。従って大学までの全ての人のための国家カリキュラムの考えに賛成か反対かを明確にすることはできない。小学校から大学まで各個人の能力の最大限の発達を助けることを念頭に置いた、各分野に核となるカリキュラムを提供する広い選択肢のある制度があったら素敵だろう。

 

 

 

Your Sample Essay Structure

Introduction = Outline

Point 1

Point 2

Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment

Conclusion = Wrap-up


Reading 9 Word List

STEP 1

1.      perception                          認識

2.      converge                             収束する、集まる

3.      fascinate                             魅了する

4.      place                                    置く

5.      stepping stool                     踏み台

6.      dim                                      暗い

7.      wit                                       知性

8.      figure out                            理解する

9.      sensory                                感覚の

10.   insight                                 洞察

11.   rational                               合理的な

irrational                            非合理的な

12.   elaborate                             入念に説明する

13.   incubation                           孵化

14.   in this sense                       この意味で

15.   conscious                            意識的な

16.   diverge                                分岐する

17.   tangle                                  もつれ

18.   subject                                 被験者

19.   disparity                             偏り

20.   apparatus                           器具

21.   disproof                               反証

22.   empirical                            実験に基づいた

 

STEP 2

23.   diving bird                          潜水する鳥

24.   epitome                               典型

25.   adept                                   巧みな

26.   fledge                                  一人前にする

27.   nestling                              

28.   synchrony                           同調性

29.   thwart                                 防ぐ

30.   on their own                       自分達だけでは

31.   mammalian                         哺乳類の

32.   ornithologist                      鳥類学者

33.   band (動詞)                   足環を付ける

34.   high tide line                      満潮時の線

35.   procrastination                  先延ばしにすること

36.   simultaneous                      同時の

 

TEST

37.   totalitarian                         全体主義の

38.   inexorable                           情け容赦のない

39.   analogously                        類似的に

40.   dictator                               独裁者

41.   general                                将軍

42.   mastermind                        指導者

43.   larvae                                  幼虫 larva の複数形

44.   pupae                                   さなぎ pupa の複数形

45.   allocation                            割り当て

46.   hierarchical                        階層の

47.   postulate                             仮定する

48.   caste                                    (身分制の)カースト

49.   optimal                                最善の

50.   given                                    或る

51.   odor                                     臭い

52.   forager                                採集者

53.   without a hitch                  滞りなく

54.   deterministic                     決まった

55.   constitutionally                  体質的に

56.   hard-wired to                     ~に生まれついている

57.   reproduction                      生殖

58.   contradict                           矛盾する

59.   proximity                            近いこと

60.   altruistic                             無私の


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 


《参考》


STEP 2 

tern / common ternアジサシ   roseate tern  ベニアジサシ   black-backed gull  オオカモメ  herring gull  セグロカモメ

 

TEST

deterministic determinism  決定論(ある出来事は、それまでの出来事のみによって決まるという考え方。)