2015年9月27日日曜日

国際教養AO入試 reference, news and issues 2015  w/Answer Keys


1.    NEWS: Komura: Security bills to deter ‘real threat’ 
POINTS & CASES: the military threat of other countries, the US request of the Japanese involvement in the counterattack operations against potential enemies, deterrent. conscription system, Constitution, the Supreme Court decision, collective self-defense, renunciation of war, Article 9, amendment, terrorists, expatriate employees and their families, involvement in wars and invasions by the US, rescue operations in disasters, military-industrial complex, imperialistic operations, soft power, pacifist nation
Task: Summarize the explanation of Mr. Komura.
Question: What are you most concerned about this change of the Japanese security policy? What should be done to avoid it now that the security bill is passed?

Although it is not so much a concern as repugnance and melancholy that I feel about the passage of the security bills, I feel depressed that now the day is certain to come when Japanese nationals kill people in other countries, especially in those countries where some of the people who were left behind or exploited in globalization have resorted to violence. SDF troops which have already been deployed off the coast of Somalia to watch pirates might be the first. Also, those attacked will be very likely to include innocent civilians as seen in often reported US “friendly bombing.” These operations and accidents would be reported through the media first, but as the same cases repeat the public would get used to them and might not be aware of the fact that our tax money is used to kill other nationals under the name of collective-self-defense. In addition to this, Collective-self-defense could be used as an excuse for collective-offence. Japanese groupism, if driven by a lie promoted through the media by the government, could allow a war to happen quite easily. Another depressing matter is that having a more active military than now can work as a stimulant rather than a deterrent in counterterrorism. The enactment of this bill verifies Japan as a full-fledged US ally and exposes Japanese nationals abroad as targets of terrorism such as suicide bombing. What those who do not want to kill as well as not wanting to be killed can do would be to strive to make a sound reality of peaceful global community. It is not military operations but good relationships that avoid terrorism and war.


2.    Refugee crisis was caused by a careless West that allowed anarchy and fear to take root in the Middle East   The Independent  (http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/middle-east/refugee-crisis-was-caused-by-a-careless-west-that-allowed-anarchy-and-fear-to-take-root-in-the-middle-east-10509173.html)
Migrant Crisis: What else could Europe try? BBC World Service, The Inquiry
POINTS & CASES: IS, Iraq-Afghan wars, Arab Spring, civil wars, globalization, immigrants, economic refugees, displaced people, Japanese immigration policy, aging society, discrimination
Question: Is there anything that Japan can do for refugees and immigrants?

For decades, Japan has been financially and technologically supporting American military operations, which have directly caused chaos in the Middle East. Also, Japan has mostly merited in globalization which have often destroyed the lives of the people in weak economies. As a country which is responsible to their plight, not to speak of humanitarian point of view, Japan should offer acceptance of refugees who are willing to come and work over here with fair and warm treatment.


POINTS & CASES the wealth gap, globalization, consumerism, sweatshop, fair trade
QUESTION: Slaves exist since ancient times. Do you think we can do without exploiting and abuses?

As slavery is part of economic structure, it might be very difficult to do without it. Some people need to buy leather shoes and suits for work. Growing up children may eat a lot of meat and fish. Most people need a cellphone. It is often difficult to imagine how many others are suffering for us to maintain or satisfy our lives. Also, in a broader sense, most of us are economic slaves. The very action we take to sustain our life, like saving a penny by choosing the cheaper, will beat down the price, which will enslave the workers on the production lines and in the distribution networks, who cannot quit for economic reason. Bonded labor and child labor are the lousiest end of this economic slavery system. As long as we live in this system, no matter how careful to be fair we are, we cannot stop exploiting and abusing the weakest of the weak. Changing the whole system in a short time is impossible, but at least on the conscious level, we should and can try to get rid of violation of fundamental human rights. Trying not to buy products of the companies whose contractors have bonded laborers or sweatshops or not to use services that take advantage of the weak would be some of the things we could do to eliminate slavery. We must give up the mindset of minding only ourselves at the expense of others.



4.    NEWS: Heirs to the Rockefeller family, which made its vast fortune from oil, are to sell investments in fossil fuels and reinvest in clean energy. BBC NEWS
Freeze fossil fuel extraction to stop climate crimes (http://350.org/climate-crimes/)
POINTS & CASES: global warming, CO2 in the atmosphere, the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) assessment report, obligation of rich countries, international cooperation, ongoing oil mining projects, emerging economies, population growth, recycling
QUESTION: Do you think moves to stop drilling fossil fuel are significant?

I definitely think it is significant to stop drilling fossil fuels. Burning of oil, coal and natural gas, as well as other byproduct of their productions, will increase CO2 in the atmosphere and thus accelerate global warming. If fossil fuel is dug out, it must be sold to make up for the cost, and the buyer must burn it to make products of provide services for profits. Measures for the shift to alternative energy sources are to slow to come to avoid catastrophe and stop the habit and think about how to make up for it later would not be a bad idea as this is a pressing issue.


5.    NEWS: Farmers from across Japan staged a protest in Tokyo on Tuesday over signs that the Japanese government will soon sign on to join negotiations for the Trans-Pacific Partnership "free-trade" agreement with the U.S. and other nations.   The Japan times
POINTS CASES: free trade, protectionism, Korean FTA and NAFTA, domestic producers, self-sufficiency, regulations, financial meltdown, social welfare, environment, copy-rights, investor-state disputes (ISD)
QUESTION:  Who do you think would benefit most from TPP?

It is clear that large corporations especially those of the US will benefit the most based on the TPP procedure and contents and results of the agreements similar to TPP. Those who are in discussion behind closed doors are politicians and corporate lawyers and it is unlikely that they make efforts to make the public benefit except in the case of their interests. Both NAFTA and Korean FTA show that fair trade agreements are actually unfair trade agreements that benefits US industries and get rid of small businesses and farmers in signatories.


6.    ISSUE: Has Austerity Worked? BBC World Service, The Inquiry (http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/p02vdbjk)
Noam Chomsky: Austerity is just class war
POINTS & CASES: stimulus, punish the weak, international community,
QIESTOPN: Which would you choose austerity or stimulus if Japan were in the same situation as Greece?

Even though they might not be very different as stimulus increases national debts and makes people suffer later while austerity instantly punishes the weak, stimulus would be a better choice than austerity, for Japan still has not lost power to raise productivity and punishing the public would damage the economy in the long run, not to speak of ethically wrong.


7.    ISSUE: Can we learn to live with nuclear power? BBC World Service, The Inquiry
Japan restarts first nuclear reactor since Fukushima disaster
POINTS & CASES: Chernobyl disaster, Three Mile Island disaster, meltdown, radiation, other energy sources, global warming, the industry, saving on electricity, changing lifestyle
QUESTION: What can we do to transform our society into one free from nuclear power plants?

First of all, we should not learn to live with nuclear power even though we can do it. The idea of using nuclear energy for generating electricity in itself is dubious from the beginning as it is the byproduct of the invention of nuclear weapons. It is true that today’s advanced civilization needs a large amount of energy to maintain itself, but it is not true that we have to keep living in the same way. Nobody dies, for example, if toilet sheets are not warm in winter and underground walkways that became darker after the Fukushima reactor meltdown have just made us realize we had overused electricity. There are many other ways to keep the turbine running which are safe and clean such as solar and wind energy. Geothermal energy and bioethanol are other ways for it. It is often said that we have the technology but we do not have the will. Japan, as a country that experienced the negative side of atomic power twice, atomic bombing on Hiroshima and Nagasaki and the Fukushima disaster after tsunami, should be wise enough to learn the lesson from this accident and make it a turning point of its energy policy. No one would blame us if we said we have had enough of nuclear energy.


8.    NEWS: In July, 2014, the UN’s human-rights committee demanded that Japan add hate speech to legislation banning racial discrimination.
POINTS: long history of discrimination against non-naturalized Koreans, xenophobia, globalization, bullying, war-time sex slaves (comfort women) issue, violence, freedom of expression
QUESTION: Do you think this is a fair demand or not. Why?

1) I think the demand fair, even overdue because Japan has a long history of discrimination and abuse against some minorities. Above all, non-naturalized Koreans have seen the darkest side of Japanese society and its individuals. Hate speech related to them, including comments on the Internet, graffiti and literatures, do not go without noticed every day. Harassment and violence, including those inflicted to innocent school girls, are also often reported. Unreported heinous activities could be countless. Some might think that hate speech is different from other acts of discrimination, but words are as painful as physical harm and words also nurture in those who use, hear, see, or read them prejudice, aggression, and sadism against the targeted people. This problem should be constantly monitored and addressed in the same intensity as influenza breakout monitoring.

2) It is strange that we Japanese are tolerant to some minorities like gays and those who have abortions while cold to foreigners like Koreans or Chinese as well as aboriginal people like Ainu people or Okinawans. Some might say that gays and those with pro-choice idea have been in our tradition, but Koreans and Chinese have existed throughout our history too and many of them have contributed to our society and culture. They are not given proper respect no matter how long they have lived with us. Naturalization is not the key factor as is clear in the case of the Ainu and Okinawan. Also, many Japanese know that they themselves would not naturalize were they to be in the same situation in a foreign country. Giving up one’s nationality is largely a matter of identity. It is different from having a membership of a society, and each member of a society should be paid the same respect to that the other members are paid to. The issue of coexistence with people with different backgrounds should be dealt with in view of building a peaceful and productive living environment for each member. A society whose members hate each other calls for its own demise. Our deep-rooted xenophobia needs some intervention. The demand from the biggest international organization to ban hate-speech would therefore help change the situation for the better.


9.    NEWS: Satire  The first cover of Charlie Hebdo after the shooting featured a man who looked like Mohammad holding the “Je suis Charlie” under the expression, “Everything is forgiven.”
POINTS & CASESviolence, satire, freedom of expression, anti-Islamism, feelings of Muslims, hypocrisy of the world leaders who participated in the Paris rally
QUESTION: What message do you think the cartoonist who drew it send?

His message would have been that he as part of the team of the publisher will forgive the shooters as forgiveness is universal teaching in any religion or ethical education, while he has no intention to give up his job of satirizing things he finds funny or strange. He is probably also implying that most Muslims, including the prophet, are feeling distress because the original teaching of Islam does not allow such violence. It is a message of a grown-up child who loves not only mankind but also satire, having been hit by those whom he has made fun of but having stood up each time saying that he was sorry that they did not like his joke but that was what he is and he cannot stop being it.


10.  Why ISIS Murdered Kenji Goto / Japan at a Crossrlads (The New Yorker)
Should Anyone Ever Talk to IS?  BBC World Service, the Inquiry
POINTS & CASES religious cult, no yield to terrorism, ransom as funding source, international society (developed countries), Japanese militarization, PM’s speech to support Israel and paying $0.2 billion, for humanitarian purposes, self-responsibility, life above everything else, 1970’s hijacking of a JAL plane
QUESTION: What can we do for Kenji Goto to be able to rest in peace?

The goal of Kenji Goto as a journalist was to report the situation in which ordinary people in the area of unrest live. He asked the Japanese not to retaliate those who killed him. Therefore, what he wanted us to do would have been to learn how the people in Iraq and Syria had their life disrupted and build public opinion to increase humanitarian aides to those areas, displaced people and refugees without losing ourselves in prejudice and discrimination against Muslims.




11.  NEWS: Kawasaki teen murder highlights hardships faced by single parents in Japan
POINTS & CASESwealth gap, child poverty, single mother, welfare programs, community, volunteer. education, competition, breakdown of the community and family relations, materialism
QUESTION: What is necessary not to repeat this kind of tragedy?

It is necessary to build a society where working women can give birth to and raise children in almost the same manner as full-time mothers. It must be difficult but the idea of seeing children as children of society, in other words children of the nation, in a not too intervening way would help realize a society which can protect minors from hazards and nip the bud of juvenile delinquency. Daycare centers and after-school schooling should be supported more with public money. Also, educating adults to be more aware of the hardships and needs of children in poor families would help prevent another death of a child.


12.  ISSUE: Is There A New Nuclear Arms Race? BBC World Service, The Inquiry
Task: Summarize the podcast of this title.

Race in developing new types of nuclear arms, localized arms races, and new generation without crisis consciousness with relatively handy weapons are the new factors to make us rightly worry about nuclear threat. By the end of the Cold War, when disarmament efforts started, most western powers and some very unstable countries had possessed enough nuclear war heads to destroy the earth. Now a new arms race has started. Nuclear states are racing to upgrade nuclear arsenal technology and make new kinds of nuclear weapons. At the same time, arms control efforts have stopped as US-Russia relations deteriorate. To make matters worse, generation turnover is making the sense of nuclear threat obsolete. It is dangerous to have new world leaders and the public without alertness and knowledge about this weapon of mass destruction. India and Pakistan having been racing to have enough nuclear warheads to destroy each other entirely without disarmament talks nor clear red lines, unlike US and Russia during the Cold War can actually use nuclear arsenals if there is a trigger like a terror attack because battlefield nuclear weapons allow commanders, not Presidents, to order their use. We should be aware of the fact that, despite disarmament treaties, there are still thousands of nuclear missiles all over the world that can destroy the whole world many times and risk factors are plenty.




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2015年9月21日月曜日

TOEFL, iBT, Independent Writing, Buying a book or watching a movie? - rewrite -

Writing Topic: Suppose you have enough money to buy a book or watch a movie. Which would you rather spend the money on, the book or the movie?


Reading the question carefully.
Which would you rather spend the money on?  This question is asking about your choice/preference. The answer can be subjective. You do not necessarily have to make an objective judgment.


Comparison and Juxtaposition
Sample Comparison

a book
a movie
a
a physical material
an experience
b
like your best friendyou choose it carefully
 and repeatedly return to it.
like friends or fashionyou enjoy their
novelty but most of them just come and go.
c
nonfiction: a lot of detailed information
fiction: about what is going on in
the character’s mind
non-fiction: a brief digested explanation
fiction: the plot and point of the original story
d
academic training
(vocabulary, sentence structure, etc.)
composite art
 (picture, music, fashion, etc.)
                                                                                          
Sample Juxtaposition
The experience you have through reading feels more real than that you have through watching a movie. When you read, you draw on your own experience to understand what is written, and it makes the story more real to you. For example, when the leading character is scolded by a strict teacher, you think of a particular teacher in your elementary school and remember the shock and embarrassment you felt when you were scolded by her. In a movie, the character of a strict teacher is presented through the interpretation of the actor and the director, which is different from your own image. Although it is always exciting and inspiring and therefore enjoyable to see the images created by great actors and directors, when it comes to reality, no other interpretation can beat your own. The world you build through reading is more real and intimate to you, and hence reading often gives you more satisfaction than watching a move.

Your Juxtaposition of one of the differences between buying a book and watching a movie:






Body Structure
Sample Body Structure for today’s writing topic
Point 1A book provides more detailed information.
Point 2Reading makes you more mature and develops your language ability.
Point 3 / Counterargument-treatmentIt is true that watching a movie takes less time to finish a story, but the effect is weaker than reading. The difference is like that between a tour and a stay.

Your Sample Body Structure
Point 1


Point 2


Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment



Paragraph development
Sample Paragraph Development of Point 1 in the Essay Plan above
Main Idea (主張)
A book can make you more mature more often than a movie can.
Explanation (主張の説明)
Reading develops your thoughts and emotions more effectively than watching a movie.
Example in general (具体例の概要)
For example, novels tell you the characters’ thoughts and feelings in detail.
Specific Example / Reason (具体例)
While watching an episode of the Harry Potter Series, for instance, you just see some troubled face of Harry when he has difficulty in mastering an important magic for defense, in the book you see precisely what is going on in his mind, that is, his mixed feelings: an urge to achieve the magic, frustration, and the secret desire to fail again as he can see his late father’s image whenever he fails.  
Follow-up / Counterargument-treatment (補足または反論の処理)
Of course a movie can do some for the same purpose through expressions and narratives, but the effect is limited. You just understand or feel the same way. On the other hand, literature develops a piece of real life in you. By reading word by word and going through each single thought and feeling that are in Harry’s mind, you will actually own this orphan’s longing for his father which is stronger than the fear of death.
Conclusion (結論)
You can enrich yourself in humanity by reading a good book. 



Your Sample Paragraph Development
Main Idea (主張)



Explanation (主張の説明)



Example in general (具体例の概要)




Specific Example / Reason (具体的例)






Follow-up / Counterargument-treatment (補足または反論の処理)





Conclusion (結論)