2021年9月17日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Do you think it is more worth building solar, wind, and biomass energy plants or reducing consumption? 2) Do you think it is more worthwhile to spend time on studies or on experiences during school years?

Drill 1  Which of the two answers to the following question is easier to read? How can you improve it? Statement: Do you think it is more worth building solar, wind, and biomass energy plants than reducing consumption?

 

Answer A: I think it is worth building solar, wind, and biomass energy plants. They are good for global warming. Thus, we should build more of them. On the other hand, I am opposed to reducing consumption. What are we going to do with the people who lose jobs? Therefore, we must continue buying goods and services.

 

Answer B: So-called green energy sources will not reduce greenhouse gases in the air. First, they release a large amount of greenhouse gasses when they are built. Second, they often burn fossil fuel or trees because they cannot generate electricity constantly. As climate change has crossed the point of no return, to mitigate the impact, drastic measures like reducing consumption must be taken.

 

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including expressions below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Do you think it is more worthwhile to spend time on studies or on experiences during school years?

 

●It is not that counts but … 「重要なのは~ではなくだ」

名詞 such as 名詞の具体例 「~ 例えば名詞の具体例の様な名詞 ~」

 

Hints for Points: Studies are necessary to live in the modern world / to gain knowledge and skills to be independent / to make an educated decision. You do not have much time to study once you graduate from school. A wide variety of experiences helps gain good insights and make good decisions. Experiences motivate a person to learn. Experiences teach students about life. Experience is life.

 

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