2021年9月30日木曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) The Japanese government should exercise more austerity as the economy is bad now. 2) Athletes should work out twice as much as they do now for better performances. - revised -

Drill 1 Which of the following answers is better as a response to the following question? The Japanese government should exercise more austerity as the economy is bad now.

 

Answer A: In my opinion, I think that the Japanese government should exercise more austerity. It should spend less. This is because the economy is bad now. If the economy were not bad now, it could spend more. Also, the government has a huge debt, which is borrowing money. It is bad for the government to have too much debt, so we cannot increase the debt. Without debt, austerity would not be necessary, but the debt is more than 200% of the GDP, which is bad, so we must continue austerity.

 

Answer B: The Japanese government should not exercise austerity because it prevents money from circulating. If the government spends less for the public, people will spend less, and the economy will be worse. We must stop this vicious cycle. The government debt is not the debt to other countries in the case of our country. It just means that the government is pumping money into society to stimulate consumption. This practice is normal in recession, and our country will not lose confidence. Rather, a huge government spending will build the county back for the better.

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including sentences with the structures below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Athletes should work out twice as much as they do now for better performances.

 

●It is for 名詞 to do …. 名詞するのは~だ。」 rather than…., 「~ と言うよりむしろ….

 

Hints for Points: quality rather than quantity, too much exercise can be harmful, cause of injury and stress, exercise that match each individual, reduce time for other aspects of life

 

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