2019年7月5日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing, Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? - revised -


Writing Topic 2
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.


Let’s think
1.      Share reasons why you are always in a hurry or prefer to take time with those who have the same preference as yours.
2.      Ask questions of those who have the opposite preference in how fast to get things done such as “Don’t you think that being always in a hurry is kind of jittery and uncool?” or “Isn’t it kind of lazy?”


Essay for Ideas and Expressions  (Barron’s, Writing for the TOEFL iBT, pp. 278)
Life is short. Haste makes waste. What’s your hurry? These three sayings characterize the way I manage my day-to-day chores. I don’t want to rush through things; I prefer to take my time.
   Life is short. You never know what may happen tomorrow, so it is important to enjoy today. By doing just a few things slowly and doing them well, you can savor the experience. You can truly enjoy what you are doing.
   Haste makes waste. We are not machines. We can’t just rush through our chores. If we do, we might forget something. We might take shortcuts and do a poor job. Then we’ll have to do the job all over again. That certainly doesn’t save us any time. By going more slowly, we can do a chore carefully, completely, and correctly.
   What’s your hurry? Where’s the fire? I don’t see any need to rush to the next experience. There’s still a lot to see and learn from the chores around you. Taking care of your baby brother, for instance, can be very rewarding. If you are in a hurry to get many things done, you can just keep the baby near you while you work on other chores. Or, you could devote your whole attention to him and observe his reactions to the environment. You can’t observe carefully if you are rushing to do other things at the same time.
   To twist a common saying, “Don’t just do something, sit there!” Take life easy and savor each minute. Life is shorter than you think.


Your Sample Essay Structure
Introduction
Point 1
Point 2
Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment
Conclusion


Speech Time
Make a one-minute speech on this topic.


Sample Paragraph Development
A      Main Idea Do not do today what you can do tomorrow.
Supporting Detail (in general) Things change, and doing things a little too early will often turn out to be just a waste of time, while time is life as the author of Momo says.
Supporting Detail (specific) For example, even if you review the next two chapters of a textbook because you think your teacher may finish two chapters in one class, she might actually digress and would not even finish one chapter.
Follow-upAlthough the extra preparation itself is not a waste because you can use it later, you could have used the time for something you could have done only on that day such as communicating with your family and friends. Textbooks will not change but you and your folks change day by day.
Conclusion Tomorrow will be a totally new day full of the unpredictable while today will never come back. All you need to do is make the most out of what you have today.

B      Main Idea Make hay while the sun shines.
Supporting Detail (in general) I try to avoid letting hesitation or procrastination ruin my life.
Supporting Detail (specific) If I think of doing something and do not do it, thinking now is not the time for it or I could do it later, I will never do it and regret not doing it in most cases.
Follow-upOf course, there are things that need time and careful attention like friendship, and do not hurry in dealing with them. In terms of all the other things, waiting makes not sense.
ConclusionTaking my time often costs me my precious moments of life, and I do not want to miss them.

Your Sample Paragraph Development:
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Supporting Detail (general)                                                                      
                                                                                                    
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Follow-up                                                                                       
                                                                                                   
                                                                                                   
Conclusion                                                                                      
                                                                                                   

Comments or Suggestion from your partner or group members
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                   

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