2019年7月23日火曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing, Many children like, and participate in, individual sports such as tennis, golf and swimming. Do you think it is better than doing team sports such as soccer and baseball? - revised -

Writing Topic 
Many children like, and participate in, individual sports such as tennis, golf and swimming. Do you think it is better than doing team sports such as soccer and baseball? Explain your opinion on this question by offering specific reasons and examples.


Sample Thought Process
1.      What is the negative of A B】?  Fill in the blank. A (    ) B
2.      If you disagree with a statement that A is better than B, what will you need to prove?
Fill in the brackets. You need to prove either B is (       ) (       ) A or B is as (      ) as A.
3.      What are the good points of team sports?
4.      What are the good points of individual sports?
5.      If you were a parent of a young child, what policy related to this writing topic would you have?


Hints for Points
1.      Advantages of team sports are that they can be enjoyed with other people, children can learn teamwork effectively, and they can make friends with teammates.
2.      Advantages of individual sports are as follows. They can be enjoyed alone. They offer flexibility in time and place for exercise. They teach self-control. They enhance power of concentration.
3.      Most of the advantages of team sports and individual sports overlap or can be found in other activities.
4.      Playing team sports is as good as playing individual sports because the good points of both types of sports overlap. Regardless of types, for a child to play a sport is good as long as the child can enjoy it and grow up mentally and physically through it. 
5.      Team sports are better than individual sports for young children to play because sports are for fun and socialization and the latter is more suitable to the former for the purpose.


Your Sample Essay Structure
Introduction
Point 1
Point 2
Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment
Conclusion


Speech Time
Make a one-minute speech on this topic.
                                              

Sample Paragraph development
Main IdeaWhether individual sports or team sports are better depends on the condition of each child.
Supporting Detail (general)Preference and aptitude count in sports.
Supporting Detail (specific)Some children enjoy playing soccer while others are good at playing golf. Some children choose baseball because their siblings play the sport, while others may dream to be a professional figure skater. It seems that the sport the child likes is the best sport for the child.
Follow-upIndividual sports reduces time to interact with other children, but this could be good for the child for the particular period of its development until the child becomes confident and ready for interaction with peers.
Wrap-upIt is more important for children to choose a sport of their favor than to choose between an individual sport and a team sport.

Your Sample Paragraph Development:
Main Idea                                                                                       
                                                                                                    
Supporting Detail (general)                                                                      
                                                                                                     
Supporting Detail (specific)                                                                       
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                   
Follow-up                                                                                      
                                                                                                    
Conclusion                                                                                      
                                                                                                    

Comments or Suggestion from your partner or group members
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                     

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