Writing Topic:
Many different jobs are important to society for different reasons.
Select one of these jobs and explain why you think that job is helpful to your
society: 1) actor, 2) lawyer, 3) tour guide. Support your essay with specific
reasons and examples.
☆Let’s Think
This topic has two directions. The first direction is “Select one of
these jobs,” so you are supposed to choose one of the three jobs given at the
end of the topic. The next direction is to explain how you think your society
benefits from the job you have chosen. You are not required to compare the
three jobs, and neither are you required to choose the most important. The
topic just says, “Choose one and explain why it is important to your society?” Let’s
note the first sentence of this topic: Many different jobs are important to
society for different reasons, meaning each job has its own significance. This
premise sets the condition that you do not compare or contrast jobs in dealing
with this topic.
♦The questions of
the same type
TOEFL Writing Topics of the same type as this one are as follows:
(1) Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you
think it has changed people’s lives. •
automobiles • bicycles • airplanes
(2) Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such
as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing
and explain why it needs to be saved.
♦Similar but
different types of questions
Now, here are question patterns that look similar to but different
from that of today’s topic:
(3) A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it
either
• to go on vacation
• to buy a car
Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your
friend’s two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose.
(4) You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business.
Which would you choose to buy?
(5) What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone
who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these
characteristics is most important to you?
Question (3) requires you to compare the choices. To answer Question
(4) and (5), even though it is not clearly stated, you also need to compare the
choices because you cannot tell, in other words, you cannot convince the reader
about, which is better or the best without showing why one is better or more
preferable than the other(s).
☆Hints for points
An actor …
♦helps you learn
about people, life, and the world.
-- by acting
in a movie on something special like a historical event or a personal
experience (e.g. historical movie, biographical
picture etc.)
♦helps develop your
imagination and creativity, which helps make life more enjoyable with visions about
the past, present, and future, or helps you become a creative person like an artist,
scientist, or entrepreneur.
-- by helping
you experience a life which is totally different from yours or a fictional life
that are often more real than a real life (e.g. science fiction movie, animated film, etc.)
♦helps you release
stress.
-- by playing the role of an incredible
character (e.g. action, superhero movie,
comedy, etc.)
A lawyer …
♦protects one’s
rights.
-- by giving
advice on what claim one can make and preparing for the law suit (e.g. unfair
trial, improper dismissal, copy rights, violation of privacy, minority crime
cases, etc.)
♦can shed light on
serious issues in society and help make a difference.
-- by taking
up a case influential to society (e.g. damages caused by pollution, women’s
rights, death penalty, neglect of the government, etc.)
A tour guide …
♦helps people
experience unfamiliar places and cultures safely and easily.
-- by
assisting tourists make the most of their tour (e.g. giving information and
advice, translating languages, making arrangements for tourists, etc.)
♦plays a role of a
citizen diplomat.
-- by
assisting in mutual understanding (e.g. helping tourists and the people in the
place they are visiting communicate with each other, leaving good impression of
the people and the country in tourists’ minds and vice versa, etc.)
☆Paragraph development
A paragraph of the body of an essay often develops its main idea as
follows:
【Main Idea】 (主張)
【Explanation】 (主張の説明)
【Detail / Example in general】 (一般的な例)
【More Specific Detail / Example】 (より具体的な例)
【Conclusion】 (結論)
♦Sample Paragraph
Development
【Main Idea】Lawyers help us protect our rights.
【Explanation】They are specialists of laws and fight in court for their clients.
【Detail / Example in general】 For example, a lawyer
can give advice on what claim can be made and will prepare for the law suit if
necessary.
【More Specific Detail / Example】 If there is an employee
whose contract has been terminated for no proper reason, his lawyer will find
the evidence of the wrongdoing of his client’s former employer and helps him
get his job back or get compensated for the damage caused by the dismissal.
【Conclusion】In this way, the lawyer helps protect fundamental human rights,
right to pursue happiness in this case.
Note: Probably because of the
thought process rooted in our culture, we Japanese tend to start with details
and end with the general idea in writing, the opposite of the English essay
structure, which goes from general to specific. Though it is difficult to
change our thought process, it might be easy to change the way we present our thoughts.
It might be a good idea to write first following our thought process, from
specific details to general ideas, and then rearrange them to fit the English
essay structure. In the case of the paragraph structure model above, it might
be easier for us to fill in the 【More Specific Detail
/ Example】first, and then write above it a sentence
that generalizes the example,【Detail / Example in
general】. Also,
a more generalized sentence can be added before the sentence written as the
thesis of the paragraph during brainstorming.
Your test paragraph development
Now let’s practice paragraph development. Choose one of the reasons
you have come up with, make it the main idea, and develop it using the
following form. As this is just a practice, make it simple, focusing on the
logic and ideas.
【Main Idea】
【Explanation】
【Detail / Example in general】
【More Specific Detail / Example】
【Conclusion】