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Question
In your opinion, is it more beneficial for schools to have strict
rules, or should a more relaxed approach be taken?
☆Let’s Think
Do research on the following questions and discuss them with others.
1.
What is Amanda’s point? Provide
a case in point.
2.
What is Pete’s point? Provide a
case in point.
3.
What is your answer to this
question? Share your opinion.
☆Hints for Points
1.
Rules protect children from
troubles.
2.
Children must learn to follow
rules to be a law-abiding citizen.
3.
Lack of discipline will make
individuals dull like today’s rich retarded politicians who are destroying our
country.
4.
It is wrong not to allow
autonomy above certain level in anything.
5.
Creativity will be lost because
children are not allowed free-thinking. Probably, the large number of strict
rules at Japanese schools is related to the small number of protests and that
protesters are regarded as if they were terrorists.
6.
Children cannot become
independent because they do not learn to think by themselves.
☆Responses for Ideas
and Expressions
It is violation of human rights when children are deprived of
freedom above certain level. Of course, some rules are necessary for the good
of the individual or society. For example, smoking is prohibited in hospitals
to protect patients. Wearing seatbelt is mandatory to protect life. However, rules
of underwear colors or the number of times a student can use a bathroom are
useless, if not harmful. Forcing students with wavy hair or brown hair by birth
to change their hair into dark straight hair is abusive. Prohibiting students
from wearing a heavy coat during winter or drinking water in the classroom is
life-threatening. These rules all violate students’ right to pursue a healthy
and cultural life and happiness. Therefore, school rules should not be strict.
(126 words)
Although some rules are vital for order and safety, I believe a more
relaxed approach to school rules should be taken. School in itself is a device
to restrict children’s freedom. It forces children to attend 5 to 6 days a week
for 4 to 6 hours a day during fixed hours. Some subjects are required subjects.
This is already stressful to children even if these rules are intended to help them.
Moreover, some schools have uniforms or strict dress codes. Many schools have
many more meaningless rules that restrict students’ life to the last detail.
The purpose of these rules is to control. By exacting obedience, school successfully
makes children braindead. It is for this reason that any fascist entity has
countless numbers of rules. Therefore, for healthy environment for education to
raise freer, creative minds, school must have as few rules as possible.
(145 words)
☆Response plan
Topic Sentence:
Supporting Details:
Conclusion:
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in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or
suggestions to each other’s response.
DRAFT
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