2022年2月25日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Most women are not violent. 2) Most significant events in life are accidental. - Revised -

Drill 1  Which response to the following statement is better? Why? Statement: Most women are not so violent as men.

 

a.     I cannot agree. I had seldom been attacked by others until bulling started. Then almost all women as well as men started attacking me mentally and physically. Actually, those physically attacked me were mostly women. This might surprise men, but the fact is that women stay nonviolent in front of men, while they are as violent as or more violent than men.

 

b.     I agree. Although I have a traumatic experience of female violence, it is personal. It is true that there have been warlike female politicians, but they are exceptions. Meanwhile, most violent crimes are committed by men. The victims of domestic violence are usually women. Whether the cause is biological, social, or psychological, statistics clearly show that more men than women are involved in violence.

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including sentences with the structures below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Most significant events in life are accidental.

 

●While it is true that , S V …,「確かに~だがSV… だ。」

●It seems that .「~の様に思える。」

 

Hints for Points: Most people make plans about important events in life, such as marriage and childbirth. Birth and death happen by chance. You do not plan to be fond of someone or something. You cannot decide when or how to get sick or die. While it is true that you can make an informed decision and make efforts to live a good life, most events in life are uncontrollable. It seems that we have little control of our fate.

 

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