2019年6月28日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing, If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?  - revised -


Writing Topic 
If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.


Let’s think
1.      What to write about How can you think of what to write on this topic?
--- You could choose a subject related to your study or interests. They can be related to your major, hobby, future goal, or interests. Also, you could choose a subject that is totally different from your field. For example, if your main interest is business, you could choose literature.

2.      How to write it How can you explain the subject you have chosen? If you have only a vague idea and do not know how to explain, you would be in trouble, since this test requires you to write at least 300 words for a high score.
--- One idea to explain your choice might be to follow the grade school writing method: to answer the questions starting with Wh or H. Who / What made you interested in it? When / Where did it happen? How did you become interested in it? Why do you want to learn it?
3.      Tell your partner or group members about your choice, and ask each other questions.


Essay for Ideas and Expressions   (Barron’s, Writing for the TOEFL iBT, pp.283-284)


Your Sample Essay Structure
IntroductionIf I had time to study a subject that I have never had the opportunity to study, I would study …
because …

Point 1
Point 2
Point 3
Conclusion


Sample Paragraph Development
Main IdeaI would study astrophysics partly because I have a feeling that it will give me an opportunity to think about life and universe.
Supporting Details (Explanation & Examples)Astrophysics deals with the physics and the universe, and it involves studies of both the invisible matters and huge objects in the vast space. A memorable word of one of the members of the art club of my high school has made me interested in it. He said, “Electrons circling around atoms is similar to planets orbiting the sun, isn’t it?” Unfortunately, this inspiring analogy of physics between the smallest and the largest never really encouraged me to study the related subjects at that time and I chose the humanities.
ConclusionYoung people are sensitive to the clues to solve questions in life and universe which all things around are hinting to them. In the course of gaining knowledge about the universe, I hope that I will have a glimpse of the secret of life and universe which I have missed in my youth.


Your Sample Paragraph Development:
Main Idea                                                                                       
                                                                                                    
Supporting Detail (general)                                                                      
                                                                                                    
Supporting Detail (specific)                                                                        
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                   
Follow-up                                                                                       
                                                                                                   
                                                                                                    
Conclusion                                                                                      
                                                                                                   

Comments or Suggestion from your partner or group members
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                    
                                                                                                     
                                                                                                   

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