2013年7月19日金曜日

TOEFL iBT independent writing, Contributions of artists to society and those of sicentists -partly rewritten-




Writing Topic

It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by our society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.



Let’s think

This writing topic consists of three parts: a premise, an instruction, and a question. The first sentence is a premise that any job is beneficial to society in general. By the second sentence, you are instructed to compare contributions of two types of people: artists and scientists. Because of the premise, you are saved from discussing if either or both of these two occupations are not necessary. The third sentence asks you to judge which job is valued more by our society. Thus, what you are supposed to do is 1) compare contributions of artists with those of scientists and 2) write which job you think is valued more.


Note

It just happens that contribution to society is not always valued rightly by society, so it does not matter if your answer to the question doesn’t comply with the result of your comparison of contributions of these two jobs. For example, you think artists contribute to society as much as scientists, but you could conclude that society value scientists more than artists for some reason.



Ideas and Expressions

Contributions of artists to society

1)    They help us develop our emotions and sense for beauty.

2)    They cultivate our imagination and creativity.

3)    They ease our soul.

4)    They increase our knowledge about the world and humans through their expressions.


Contributions of scientists to society

1)    They protect and develop our life.

2)    They help us save our future.

3)    They increase our knowledge about the world and humans.


Decisive factors on which type of contribution is valued more by our society

1)    money paid for their work (e.g. salary, government funding)

2)    tokens of respect they receive (e.g. permanent resident status)

3)    the way they are treated in the education system (e.g. the number of subjects, lessons, teachers, and universities)

4)    whether most parents want to see their children become artists or scientists




Essay for Ideas and Expressions

(Barron’s, Writing for the TOEFL iBT, pp. 304-305)
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