2013年4月3日水曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing, A traditional house in the county or an urban apartment building built in a modern style? -partly rewritten-



Writing Topic

What sort of setting would you like for your home, a traditional house in the county or an urban apartment building built in a modern style? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

 

Let’s think

Some questions make you wonder which planet you are on now. How many people actually want to live in either of these types of setting? A really traditional house in the country which still remains now in this industrialized world is an old farm house, often without electricity, in a remote area suffering from depopulation, and people who live in such places are elderly people whose children have left them to work in cities. Also, as most population of the world concentrate in urban areas, if you want to live in a city and still want to live in a decent apartment which can be described as modern, you have to work 25 hours a day and have little time to enjoy to your heart’s content the latest movies or exhibitions that are showing next door unless you are born with a silver spoon in your mouth. Neither can be a romantic, which-lifestyle-would-you-prefer setting.

 

Of course, these are the negative images of the two settings given in this writing topic. Now let’s see what kind of positive images we are supposed to develop from them. They are two ultimate images of ideal homes. Would you like to have a relaxed life close to nature or would you like to spend every day in an atmosphere that stimulates all of your senses?  Which do you prioritize in your life, nature or civilization? Which would you prefer, an idyllic setting or urban setting?

 

Note: This question starts with the word “What,” not “Which.” You do not exactly have to choose either of these diagonally opposite types of places to live. Write, “Honestly, I would like to live in a high-tech mansion in a resort,” the mixture of both. However, since all kinds of settings can be more or less grouped into either of the two, this writing topic can be dealt with as a choice question. Thus, writing about both settings would be a good idea.

 

Hints for points

Brainstorm characteristics of each choice, juxtaposing them point by point.


 

Traditional house in the country

Modern apartment in a city

environment

full of nature, good for the health

constantly changing, noisy, polluted

lifestyle

relaxing, slow, monotonous

exciting, fast-paced

convenience

low prices

life based on automobile transportation

safer

many means of transportation

varieties of shops, restaurants

many hospitals, schools, cultural facilities

relationship

intimate, warm

dry, individualistic

people

same kind of people, many relatives

carefree, relaxed, down-to-earth

conservative

people with many different backgrounds

interesting, open-minded, freer

progressive

 

Two ways of dealing with opposite ideas (Two types of body structures for a choice question)

Choose either of the following two ways of dealing with choices in the writing topic, and make a framework of the body of your full essay. It is one idea of efficiency to write the framework of the body and develop it first, and then add the introduction and the conclusion.

 

Comparing choices point by point

 You write about both choices comparing and contrasting them point by point.

   e.g.

    Point 1: Comparison of the environment, convenience, and security

    Point 2: Comparison of the leisure activities

    Your preference (choice)

 

Developing images of each choice

You write about each choice separately.

    e.g.

     About living in a traditional house in the county

     About living in an urban apartment building built in a modern style

     Your preference (choice)

 

The framework of the body of your full essay


 

 

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