2025年8月5日火曜日

Writing for an Acdemic Discussion Should gambling be legalized? - revised -

 Do you think gambling should be legalized?

 

 

Let’s Think

1.        What are the advantages and disadvantages of legalizing gambling?

2.        Which partner would be the most dangerous to you, a smoker, a drinker, or a gambler?

 

 

Hints for Points

1.        Gambling is addictive.

2.        It raises crime rates.

3.        It enriches antisocial groups.

4.        Tax revenue from cassinos not so much help the city as reduces its budgets that should be used for other purposes like healthcare, education, and welfare.

5.        Banning makes gambling go underground.

 

 

Responses for Ideas and Expressions

Ethical issues:

I respect individual freedom, but I cannot support legalization of gambling because it causes serious ethical issues. Fundamentally, gambling is ethically wrong because these so-called games of chance are for profits that are designed to make visitors lose. Nevertheless, it does not choose customers. Other than wealthy people who have a large amount of disposal income, ordinary citizens can get involved in gambling and lose a fortune, which destroys lives of addicted gamblers and their families. In addition to these tragedies, the mindset for hitting-a-jackpot and becoming a tycoon without caring others will deteriorate conventional lives based on diligent and conscientious daily labor, and this will drive people into an insane state of mind. It is the hotbed of get-rich-quick schemes and acceptance of neoliberal practices that make people worship those who make money and dehumanize those who lost in competition. Those inhumane comments made by neoliberalists show the emptiness and ruthlessness of their mental life. In this way, gambling is potentially harmful to the humanity. (166 words)

 

Economic problem

Legalization of gambling can weaken the economy of the society. In general, antisocial groups like mafia and yakuza do gambling business. Thus, legalization of gabling allows white-collar mafia to expand their illicit businesses, and this will influence normal economic activities because bad money drives out good money. In addition, gambling does not always increase tax revenue. It often wrecks the economy of the cities, except for the traditional gambling cities, such as Las Vegas and Macao. Newly-built gambling cities have all failed. A plan called Osaka Integrated Resorts (Osaka IR), which was launched after the legalization of some types of gambling in Japan in 2018, has been causing concerns that its large cassino targeting the wealthy may cause a huge deficit because it is hard to expect that it will attract enough visitors. Underground gambling is bad enough, but government-owned cassinos will cause more harm because tax money used to make up for the loss surpasses the revenue from the cassino. Therefore, gambling is all harm, no good, and so we must keep gambling illegal. (175 words)

 

 

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