In your opinion, is it more beneficial for schools to have strict
rules, or should a more relaxed approach be taken?
☆Let’s Think
1.
Share examples of strict rules
in schools.
2.
Why does school have rules?
3.
Talk about the pros and cons of
more relaxed approach.
☆Hints for Points
1.
Rules protect children from
troubles.
2.
Children must learn to follow
rules to be a law-abiding citizen.
3.
Lack of discipline will make
individuals dull like today’s rich retarded politicians who are contributing to
the demise of the human race.
4.
It is wrong not to allow
autonomy above certain level in anything.
5.
Creativity will be lost because
children are not allowed free-thinking. Probably, the large number of strict
rules at Japanese schools is related to the small number of protests and that
protesters are regarded as if they were terrorists.
6.
Children cannot become
independent because they do not learn to think by themselves.
☆Responses for Ideas
and Expressions
Although I partly agree with Amanda in that some rules are vital for
order and safety for proper learning environment, I believe a more relaxed
approach to school rules should be taken. School in itself is a device to
restrict children’s freedom. It forces children to attend 5 to 6 days a week
for 4 to 6 hours a day during fixed hours. Some subjects are required subjects.
This is already stressful to children even if these rules are intended to help them.
Moreover, some schools have uniforms or strict dress codes. Many schools have
many more meaningless rules that restrict students’ life to the last detail.
The purpose of these rules is to control. By exacting obedience, school
successfully makes children braindead. It is for this reason that any fascist entity
has numerous rules. Therefore, for healthy environment for education to raise
freer, creative minds, school must have as few rules as possible. (144 words)
I agree with the opinion of Peter that excessive control diminish
students’ independence. It is violation of human rights when children are
deprived of freedom above certain level. Of course, some rules are necessary
for smooth and effective education. For example, smoking is prohibited for
healthy development of children. However, rules of underwear colors or the
number of times a student can use a bathroom are useless, if not harmful. Forcing
students with wavy hair or brown hair by birth to change their hair into dark
straight hair is torturous. Prohibiting students from wearing a heavy coat
during winter and drinking water in the classroom is life-threatening. These
rules all violate students’ right to pursue a healthy and cultural life and
happiness. Therefore, school rules should not be strict. (119 words)
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