2024年11月3日日曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion Roommates your university assings or those who you choose?

Would you rather have the university assign roommates, or would you prefer to choose your own? (education)

 

 

Lets Think

1.     If the assignment of roommates by the university is random, what would they be like?

2.     If the assignment of roommates by the university not random, how would they be chosen?

3.     What are the advantages and disadvantages of selecting your roommate by yourself?

 

 

Hints for Points

1.        Randomness may bring interesting experiences. It may also make me mature.

2.        I would like to make friends with many different people and understand them.

3.        College life is to interact with many different people to expand your mind.

4.        I do not want other people to decide who I should live with.

5.        University may either put the same kind of people together or the other way around. Either way will make some students unhappy.

6.        I would choose my best friends as my roommates for good memories and would do things we can only do during college years like discussing all night every day.

7.        I would like to choose my roommates to make the best environment for study.

8.        I would rather live with people who are similar to me because it would stabilize my college life.

9.        I would rather be with quiet and kind people.

 

 

Sample Essay Structure


A          

My choice

My idea about college life

Universitys choice

Conclusion

 

B

My choice

Good point 1

Good point 2

Bad points and why I do not care

Conclusion


 

Sample for Ideas and Expressions

My choiceLike Ben, I find it exciting to meet new people, but when it comes to roommates of a university dormitory, I would rather choose them by myself.

Supporting DetailsLiving in a dorm room is a precious experience which, if you get the most out of it, will be a lifetime treasure. Whether it is possible or not depends on whether the roommates are your friends or the arranged. With the arranged roommates, you may end up just sharing the space and having small talks once in a while unless they are miraculously compatible to you. Even if you match, it takes a while to open up to each other. If you choose people you already know well, you can start a fulfilling dorm life on day one.

Counterargument-treatmentI know that networking is important. As Ben says, unexpected friendships will expand your life. However, networking can be done outside of dorms. Also, it is often the case that most acquaintances are attractive or exciting to be with but not the type you can stand being with for more than a few hours. It is preferable that roommates are people you can spend time with forever.

ConclusionAfter all, a dormitory room is a half-private place. It is fundamentally a place for rest and recharging, a space for reflection and development, and thus sharing the room with people I can be naturally on good terms with would be the best. (235 words)

 

Main IdeaI prefer to choose my roommates because the university assignment can be racist.

Supporting DetailsAs I am a Japanese, they may make me join other Asian students. Although I have no problem with sharing a room with other Asians, this is different from what I expect in my dorm life. I would like to live with people from non-Asian countries to experience totally different values, mindset, and customs from mine and would like to make efforts for mutual understanding.

Counterargument-treatmentUniversity officials may think it for the good of Asians to stay together in a non-Asian country, but this is not what they are supposed to assume. Indeed, living with other Asians would be comfortable because we have a lot in common, and the comfort will be the stumbling block to going out and mingling with people with various backgrounds.

ConclusionUniversities should not decide which students should hang out together.  (148 words)

 


 

 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

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