2024年2月3日土曜日

Academic Discussion and Writing   Should high school students take on part-time jobs while managing their academic responsibilities?

Question: Should high school students take on part-time jobs while managing their academic responsibilities? 

 

 

Let’s Think

1.       Think about the following expressions of Professor Johnson and make sure the point of this discussion:

“the complex intersection of education and practical experience”

“an era where real-world experience and academic achievements are both highly valued”

“how this balance affects students’ development and preparation for future challenges”

   Note: The professor’s question is not about part-time jobs as one of the extracurricular activities but those as part of education.

2.       What do you think high school students should learn other than academic subjects?

3.       Does your school allow you to work part-time? Do you know the reason for the policy? Have you ever had a part-time job? If so, share the experience with other students.

 

 

Hints for Points

For:

1.     Students can learn what it is like to work for money, and it will help them (to) think about their future.

2.     By having a part-time job, they can meet many kinds of people.

 

Against

1.     Having a part-time job will deprive students of other real-life experiences such as club activities, volunteering, and interaction with friends.

2.     Working involves what students do not have to go through, like harassment or violence.

 

 

Sample Responses

A        ThesisWorking part-time is good for students’ development and facilitates their studies.ReasonWorking for money as a member of a team with many kinds of people enhances cognitive ability, maturity, and acquisition of fundamental work ethics like honesty and punctuality. This will lead to better understanding of reality and clear future vision, which are good motivation to study.

Counterargument TreatmentIt is true that other extracurricular activities such as volunteering are in place for students to learn about society, but they fall short of hands-on experience as a wage-earner that effectively nurture their empathy. Social activities that school promotes are set aside for educational purposes, and this process makes them ineffective for students to learn the reality and acquire new perspectives. For example, volunteering makes students regarded as good children and appreciated for doing some harmless jobs, while part-timers are often looked down upon and ill-treated. Harassment is common and they come to know that people tend to be hard on those who are in the weaker position. This knowledge must be earned for anything so that they won’t be obnoxious to anyone in the future.

ConclusionPart-time jobs during high school years, when people are most sensitive, help produce good citizens. (199 words)

 

B        ThesisHigh school students can wait for the experience of working part-time till they graduate.

ReasonMost of the benefits are gained in other times of life, while the loss would be irretrievable. Both college-bound and non-college-bound students are going through the most crucial years in their formation. The events and projects at school and the interaction and relationships with other students, friends, and family influence the completion of their personality and values, and they can only be experienced during high school years.

Counterargument TreatmentOn the other hand, experience gained by labor will be available in liberal amount soon in the case of non-college-bound students and in a few years in the case of college-bound students when they work as inters. Meanwhile, the real-world experience owes more to personal history than to working experience. Some high school students would be more grown-up than adults who have worked for a living for decades.

ConclusionTherefore, I find little benefits of part-time jobs as part of education. (160 words)


 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

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