2021年11月18日木曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing With the help of technology, students nowadays are learning much more effectively. - revised -

Lesson 21  Drills

Drill 1  Which of the following answers is better as a response to the following question? With the help of technology, students nowadays are becoming much smarter today.

 

Answer A: I agree. First, schools have a television set in each classroom. Students can watch videos and educational programs, so they can understand the content of the textbooks well. Second, students can learn more effectively because of the computer, on which we can use software for studies. For example, doing drills on my computer helps me learn English and math quickly. Lastly, the Internet helps us look up things quickly. Therefore, we are getting much smarter now.

 

Answer B: Although students are learning more efficiently than before, they may not be thinking much. For example, when you see a phrase that is not in a dictionary, it took a long time or often impossible to find its meaning before Google started, but now we can find it in a second. Thus, we are learning and understanding more than before. However, because we can find the answer easily now, we use our brain less. We had to think about how to find the information before, while we do not have to now. This change might be making our brain softer.

 

Drill 2

Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including sentences with the structures below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Technology makes reading much more effective.

 

要求・主張・提案 that S V原形 ~「~だと要求・主張・提案。」(V原形は仮定法現在)

Parents demanded that the government provide students with tablets.

●as well as 「~同様に」 (~は名詞・動名詞およびその相当語句)

The Internet allows us to look up a word whose meaning we do not know as well as watching videos.

 

Hints for Points: Reference is easier and faster thanks to the Internet. Highlighted parts are shared with other readers.  Finding a tag on a paper book is easier than one in an electronic reader.  Screens do not allow marginal notes and make highlighting troublesome even though both of these actions play important roles in reading, internalizing the content.

 

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Lesson 21  Writing Topic

Consider the following statement. With the help of technology, students nowadays are learning much more effectively. Support your response by including specific reasons and examples.

 

 

Let’s think

1         Have you ever learned with any of the following? How much do you think you learned with it?

electronic dictionary  vocabulary building app  language learning software  online school  Skype

 

2         Is technology good for any of the following? Why?

information search  widening views  memorization  learning practical skills such as dancing or drawing pictures  experiments  learning languages  critical thinking   learning about politics

 

3         Do you think students nowadays are learning much more effectively with the help of technology?

 

Hints for points


Agree

1.     Educational materials and sites help students understand subjects more effectively than before.

 

2.     Information search and comparison of multiple materials have become more efficient than before.

 

Disagree

1.     Fewer students have the ability to read difficult materials than before because most students do not read books anymore due to social media.

 

2.     Many students learn less than before because they copy and paste information.



Your Sample Essay Structure

Introduction = Outline

Body 1

Body 2

Body 3

Conclusion = Wrap-up

 

Paragraph Development


A        Main IdeaInformation search and comparison of multiple materials have become more efficient than before.

Supporting Detail (general)Information technology now allow us to get necessary information for studies anytime and anywhere.

Supporting Detail (specific)This has made it unnecessary to go to the library or bookstores to find related materials. Google search provides numerous sources, including newspapers and magazines, instantly.

Follow-upEven when a certain book is necessary, ordering from online bookstores allows us to get a copy within a day or two.

ConclusionInformation technology has made it physically efficient to collect good materials.

 

B        Main IdeaFewer students than before have the ability to read difficult materials because most students do not read books anymore.

Supporting Detail (general)Reading novels has been proved to enhance the ability to read.

Supporting Detail (specific)Natalie Wexler makes a point in her article, The Power of “Just Reading a Great Novel,” that emotional engagement helps readers learn more vocabulary and complex sentence structures.

Follow-upStudents can read novels on an electronic reader, but since they are engaged in social media, they read only online postings.

ConclusionWhen students spend most of their reading time on short materials on their phones, their powers of comprehension will deteriorate.


Your paragraph development practice

Main Idea

 

Supporting Detail (general)

 

Supporting Details (specific)

 

Follow-up

 

Conclusion


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