Writing Topic
What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your
age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
☆Hints for Points
1. more facilities for entertainment/study/networking
2. buildings and streets with better appearances
3. better transportation systems
4. scholarship program/free tuition
☆Sample Essay Structure
【Introduction = Outline】Making streets look more attractive would help attract the young.
【Point 1】Making the streets cleaner would make them
more likable to the young.
【Point 2】I would also like new bulletin boards to
be placed in some corners for information exchange.
【Point 3】Appearance is not everything, but the
first impression counts and streets are the face of the town.
【Conclusion = Wrap-up】 I would like to
make the streets of my hometown more beautiful and exciting.
♦Your Sample Essay Structure
【Introduction = Outline】
【Point 1】
【Point 2】
【Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment】
【Conclusion = Wrap-up】
☆Sample Paragraph Development of Point 1 in Sample Essay Structure
【Main Idea】Making the
streets cleaner would make them more likable to the young.
【Explanation】Young people,
mostly young women, are sensitive to cleanliness.
【Example】Everyone knows that there are few people in filthy places even
during the day. I myself, for example, stay away from a street with cigarette butts
and plastic bags.
【Follow up】Regulation would not be necessary. Putting up posters with humor or
making a project as part of education may work.
【Conclusion】As the saying goes, cleanliness is next to godliness. Not only the
young but also all the other generations will like my hometown if it is
cleaner.
♦Your test paragraph development:
【Main Idea】
【Explanation】
【Example】
【Follow up】
【Conclusion】
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