2022年5月29日日曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Voting should be mandatory. 2) All mothers should be allowed a three-year paid maternity leave.

Drill 1  Find eight differences between the two responses to the following question? Which do you think is more appropriate as an answer in a written test? Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Voting should be mandatory.

 

 Answer A: I agree. It’s a duty for a citizen living in a democracy to vote. Because, voting is the only way to directly reflect the majority opinions. For accuracy, all citizens must vote, and also, voting lets politicians know that people are watching them. Without this function, politics will deteriorate. For example, Japan. It is the low voting rates that are causing the corruption of the government in Japan. The majority party would not be so negligent if people make their voices heard. So, voting should be mandatory.


Answer B:
I agree with the statement that voting should be mandatory. It is a duty for a citizen living in a democracy to vote, because voting is the only way to directly reflect the majority opinions. For accuracy, all citizens must vote. Also, voting lets politicians know that people are watching them. Without this function, politics will deteriorate. For example, in Japan, it is the low voting rates that are causing the corruption of the government. The majority party would not be so negligent if people made their voices heard. Therefore, voting should be mandatory.

 

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following question, write a short essay on it including expressions below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All mothers should be allowed a three-year paid maternity leave.

 

● It is that … だ」【強調構文(分裂文)】

● If 過去形 , S would V … 「もし~したら...するだろう。」【仮定法過去(現在の事実の逆を仮定)】

 

Hints for Points: Child-rearing should be considered a job. If it were easy to raise children, birth rates would rise. The first three years of one’s life are crucial in one’s development.

 

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