2021年10月23日土曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Progress in science is always good. - revised -

Writing Topic

Consider the following statement. Progress in science is always good. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Support your response by including specific reasons and examples.

 

 

Let’s think

1         Which of the following two statements do you sympathize with? Why?

a.     Lying is always bad.

b.     Sometimes, there is a time when you have to lie to avoid hurting someone.

2         Give examples of benefits from progress in science.

3         Are there any negative effects of the progress in science? What are they?

 

Hints for points

Good points of progress in science

-        It gives us more convenience, speed, or precision.

-        It makes what was impossible before possible.

-        It gives us new perspectives on the world and ourselves.

 

Drawbacks of progress in science

-        Many problems have occurred.

weapons of mass destruction

environmental problems such as pollution, global warming (climate crisis), etc.

new types of crimes

hazardous substances and organisms that did not exist before

social changes that make some people confused

humans being unable to keep up with the speed of the technology

desire for new products, etc.

-        It causes degeneration

It makes us weak.  e.g. better transportation less exercise

It makes us forget some skills  e.g. forgetting spellings

It makes us think less  e.g. Googling before thinking

 

Sample Essay Structures

A        Introduction = OutlineI cannot entirely agree with the statement that progress in science is always good.  

Good PointsScience makes our lives convenient and lets us know about the world.

Bad PointsScience and technology has created weapons of mass destruction and caused global warming.

Conclusion = Wrap-upAdmitting that we all benefit from scientific discoveries and inventions, I am still skeptical about goodness of scientific progress.

 

B        Introduction = OutlineI totally disagree with the idea that progress in science is always good.

Point 1According to Harari, irrigation technology has deprived us of freedom by making us give up hunting and gathering, which is fun, and confining our lives to the care of plants, which is tough. Now the rhythm of life that machines create has become too fast for humans to keep up with.

Point 2Death toll of wars have become larger as technology has advanced.

Point 3Countless numbers of species have gone extinct owing to human activities with technology.

Conclusion = Wrap-upProgress in science often causes problems. Therefore, it is not always good.

 

Your Sample Essay Structure

Introduction = Outline

 

                    

 

                    

 

                    

 

Conclusion = Wrap-up


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