2021年10月22日金曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Japan is the best country in the world. 2) Progress in information technology (IT) is always good. - revised -

Drill 1 Which of the following answers is better as a response to the following question? Japan is the best country in the world.

 

Answer A: I definitely agree with the opinion that Japan, where I live, is the best country in the world. It has four seasons, and the food is good. Its traditional food, called washoku, is designated as UNESCO Intangible Cultural Heritage. We admire our parents and cooperate with each other. We are also nice to foreigners. We are proud of our hospitality, called omotenashi. All the important inventions like rice cookers, karaoke, emoji, and smartphones are Japan’s. People all over the world love our anime, manga, and video games. So, obviously we are Number One.

 

Answer B: I love my country Japan, and it may be a good place to live in at least no one carries guns here, except for the police, and we have universal healthcare. However, it cannot be said that it is the best. Its minimum wage is among the lowest in the G7 economies, and one in two children of a single parent family is poor. Its gender equality is ranked 120th among 156 countries. We have made few remarkable inventions that contribute to the world over the last 20 years. Moreover, we accept few immigrants and refugees, and we treat foreign workers so badly that many disappear or die before they go home.

 

Drill 2 Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including sentences with the structures below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Progress in information technology (IT) is always good.

 

●not always ~「必ずしも(いつも)~とは限らない。」

●it is no exaggeration to say that 「~ と言っても過言(言い過ぎ)ではない」

 

Hints for Points: more workload   fake news  spread of unnecessary information  less time for oneself  fear of others’ opinions  lower self-image  approval-seeking behaviors

 

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