2019年11月3日日曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drill You should sometimes eat what is proved to be good for the health but you do not like to eat.


Consider the following statement. People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Support your response by including specific reasons and examples.


☆Let’s think
1       Which of the following two sentences would like to hear as advice?
a.    You should do things that you do not enjoy doing.
b.    You should sometimes do things that you do not enjoy doing.

2       Do you sometimes do the following activities? Why/Why not?
cleaning your room / studying a subject that you are not interested in / talking to a person you do not go well with / admitting your mistake or shortcoming / stop using your phone before going to bed
eating a dessert that you do not like / hanging out with people that are different from yourself / playing a game that you are not good at

3       Do you think people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing?

☆Hints for points
Agree
1.    People can overcome their weakness and become confident.
2.    People can learn something new.

Disagree
1.    Stress is harmful.
2.    People can be truly happy only when they are doing what they enjoy doing.

Your Sample Essay Structure
【Introduction = Outline】
【Body 1】
【body 2】
【body 3】
【Conclusion = Wrap-up】


☆Paragraph Development
Sample Paragraph Development
【Main Idea】By doing things that you do not enjoy doing, you can confirm the reality you live in.
【Transition】We humans tend to cocoon ourselves from the assault of harsh reality.
【Supporting Details】We avoid interacting with obnoxious individuals but they might have become nice. We read and watch what we already know well about although the world is full of things that we should be informed of. We cherry pick reality and try to believe that everything is all right and we are doing well. However, that is a trap that makes us conceited because the reality is always there regardless of what we try to believe.
【Follow-up】You do not always have to do be alert, which is stressful.
【Conclusion】However, you need to update your reality once in a while by interacting with what you think is not your cup of tea so that you do not get lost in the journey of your life.

Your test paragraph development:
【Main Idea】

【Transition】

【Supporting Details】



【Follow-up】


【Conclusion】


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