2019年10月6日日曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing, drill Athletes should work out twice as much as they do now for better performances.


 Drill

Discuss the following statement, write a short essay on it including sentences with the structures below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Athletes should work out twice as much as they do now for better performances.

●It is for 名詞 to do …. 名詞するのは~だ。」
rather than…., 「~ と言うよりむしろ….

Hints for Points: quality rather than quantity, too much exercise can be harmful, cause of injury and stress, exercise that match each individual, reduce time for other aspects of life

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