Pre-TOEFL writing, What are the qualities of a good neighbor?

Writing Topic

Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

☆Let’s Think

If you have some neighbors, you can empirically tell what kind of neighbors are good ones. If you do not, you could draw on your knowledge gained from the media or talks with people around you. You could also imagine an ideal neighbor by asking yourself what kind of neighbor you want to have or you yourself want to be.

☆Hints for Points

A good neighbor …

1.    is thoughtful.

2.    is helpful.

3.    is gentle.

4.    is cheerful.

5.    does not discriminate against some neighbors.

6.    do not interfere his or her neighbor’s life.

7.    does not bother others by being selfish.

8.    follows legitimate rules.

☆Sample Description

Good neighbors are empathic. They are like extended family members who are in good terms with you. They respect your privacy but give you a good smile and warm words when you meet them and come help you when you are in trouble. In a traditional society, where most of the members were related, such neighbors were common. If there was a young couple who had their first child cry hard every night, the neighbors would send them a gentle middle-aged housewife, who would ask them if there was anything wrong with their child. By doing so, they saved both the parents and the child. In a modern society, where most inhabitants in an area do not know each other, it is difficult for a next-door neighbor to visit a household with a problem, but similar thoughtful actions would be possible if we seriously think about our neighbors instead of being preoccupied with our own business all the time.