2016年4月15日金曜日

Pre-TOEFL writing, good points and bad points of my town or city to live in in the eye of someone I know

Writing Topic
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.


Let’s Think
That there is no place like home is in the eye of the beholder. In the eye of a stranger, a person you know, your town or city has a short-coming or two. Objective view of your town would help you to come up with the response to this writing topic question.

Hints for Points
1.    many/few facilities for entertainment/study/networking
2.    buildings and streets with beautiful/shabby appearances
3.    sufficient/insufficient transportation systems
4.    existence/absence of scholarship program/free tuition
5.    dense population/under population
6.    caring/apathetic neighbors

Sample Essay Structures
Sample 1
Introduction = OutlineIf one of my acquaintances plans to visit my city, the person would find it very exciting to live in but probably dislike the environment.
good point 1My city has many stylish places for fun and cultural facilities.  e.g. award-winning bakeries, museums and galleries
good point 2It is easy to get around in and out of my city.  e.g. easy access to the subway stations and highways
【bad pointLack of nature would make some unhappy.  air pollution, noise
Conclusion = Wrap-upAlthough it is not perfect to inhabit for a long time, my city is an inspiring place for most people.

Sample 2
Introduction = OutlineI live in a college town in the middle of the mountains. Most people may find my town boring and a little inconvenient, but bookworms may like to live in it.
bad point 1There are few facilities.  e.g. few coffee shops or restaurants, no sports center
bad point 2The municipal office does not collect some types of waste.   cardboard boxes, fluorescent light bulbs
good pointThere are many facilities for reading. e. g. many book stores, a good library, a museum dedicated to a famous cartoonist. 
Conclusion = Wrap-upOther than a small garbage-related problem, the living conditions of my town would be judged good especially for students.


♦Your Sample Essay Structure
Introduction = Outline


Point 1


Point 2


Point 3


Conclusion = Wrap-up



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