2025年5月16日金曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion Employee education or investment in other resources? - revised -

Should companies prioritize developing their workforce above all else, or are there more effective says to spur growth? (business management)

 

 

 

Lets Think

1.        What is investment?

--- Investment is spending resources in something for future returns. The word investment usually means buying stocks, which will increase capitals of corporations. If the company does well, investors will gain returns (dividends). We also use the word figuratively as in You should invest your time and energy in many different things so that you can have wider choices when you try to find a job.

 

2.        What is the major goal of the corporation?

--- The major goal of the corporation is to make profits. They invest their money in various areas to make profits.

 

3.        Exactly what does a business invest its money in?

--- For example, if you start an ice cream shop, you need to pay for the building to make and sell ice cream, equipment, materials, workers, advertisements, research and development, and so on.

 

4.        How can the business benefit from educating and training its employees?

 

5.        Is educating employees more important than renting a good-looking building, buying efficient machines, buying better ingredients, using a famous advertising company, or upgrading or inventing a good product or service? Why/Why not?

 

 

Hints for Points

workers > other factors

a.        Productivity will increase because employees will work more efficiently. They will work more in less time with fewer mistakes.

b.        Turnover rates and hiring costs will be lower because the workers will be loyal to the company. Loyalty, morale, and passion are vital for a company to survive.

c.         Trained employees will contribute to evolving the company especially when it needs to change.

d.        Public relations (PR) will improve as good employees will improve the image of the company.

e.        Training costs will decrease in the future because workers will educate themselves and each other.

f.          A machine will not fix itself or grow while a huma will.

 

workers  another factor/other factors

a.        Place: Customers may increase. People will try a new building or location at least once.

b.        Facilities and materials: You can make better products that sell well more efficiently and safely.

c.         Advertising: Advertisements can enhance profitability by brand recognition and loyalty; they make your company known to new consumers and get customers to have better image of the company and the products.

d.        Research and development (R&D): Better goods and services through product development will make the company competitive. It is innovation that will help the business survive in competition.

e.        Mechanization: Machines are more efficient than humans. AI learns much faster and makes better decisions than humans. In addition, they are often better than humans in business ethics. For example, embezzlement won’t occur.

f.          Marketing counts a lot. Going into the global market is more important than investing in workers for a company to survive in globalization.

 

 

Reply for Ideas and Expressions

Because of the contract stipulating that corporations work in order to increase the capital that their shareholders have invested in, most companies treat their workers as consumable supplies. However, they are actually assets of the company. Therefore, I believe that the most important thing business corporations should invest in is the education and training of their employees. Business owners must realize that it is not the bottom line but the workers that their business depends on.

 

Marginalizing workers is not wise. In general, companies give workers little education and easily make them redundant. Not only do they lay off workers for short-term profits but also they try to cut costs by outsourcing for cheap labor or by automation, or robotization. However, not to speak of being inhumane, these practices will not lead to development of the company. Uneducated workforce with low morale lead to low performance. High absenteeism and serious errors will cost the company money and time. Turning unskilled workers into skilled workers, will help avoid skilled-labor shortage, which increases long-term profits.

 

Most workers will not waste training resources as long as they are treated properly. If they learn how the business works, they will have more interest in it. If they learn how to work quickly and neatly, they will practice it. If they are shared ideas about a new product, they can come up with better ones. They may also provide valuable information, knowledge, and opinions from the people who actually do the job on the site. There is an idea that people work for money and educating them does little to improve their performance, but it is condescending to have such an idea about workers. Most people have desire for improvement and companies should invest in it. Possible adverse effects among workers who are unhappy about frequent sessions can be avoided by offering options between basic training only and courses with advanced levels.

 

In terms of other areas of investment, it should be remembered that the performance of the people who are in charge will determine the outcome. Product development needs the brain for innovation more than facilities. Marketing requires not only data but also insight and intuition. Sales relies mostly on relationship skills of sales staff because customers or clients need to trust the company before buying their products. Manufacturing is improved by attentiveness and ingenuity of the workers on the assembly line. People are the decisive factors in all the areas of investment of business.

 

Personnel are the most valuable asset of a company, which determines the total productivity of the company. Therefore, their training and education is the most important thing for business corporations to invest in. Besides, what is a company all about if its workers are not happy and active at work?

 

 

Point Structure Samples


Sample A

Point 1Merits of employee education

Point 2Merits of other types of investment

Point 3Your decision

 

 

Sample B

Point 1Benefit of employee education 1

Point 2Benefit of employee education 2

Point 3Reasons why employee education outweighs other types of investment




Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

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2025年5月11日日曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion A jog that will have higher demand in the future - revised -

What job which exists now that will have higher demand in the future? (job and technology)

 

 

Lets Think

1.        What kind of tasks are robots and AI good at?

  

2.        What are shortcomings of robots and AI?

 

3.        A Google search says, “jobs in the tech, healthcare, and sustainability sectors are expected to see significant growth”. Think of specific jobs in these sectors.

 

4.        What other sectors of jobs do you think will be high in demand?

 

 

Notes:

1.     Machines are good at calculation, repetition, dealing with a huge amount of data, tasks that require accuracy and speed, working nonstop for long hours, and doing dangerous jobs.

2.     Machines lack flexibility. They need electricity. They don’t care about life. They can malfunction. They can also be manipulated by malware.

3.     Google lists of specific occupations in higher demand in the future:

Specialists of Artificial Intelligence (AI) and Machine Learning (ML), data scientists, software developers, information security analysts, renewable energy specialists, nurse practitioners, physician assistants, and mental health professionals

4.     Arts and music can be in higher in demand. Comedy and satire can be more popular than now.

 

 

Hints for Points

1.      Computer specialists will always be in demand because it will always be humans that will control and improve machines.

2.      We need more renewable energy specialists as climate crisis is in progress. To soften the impact of it or, if possible, stop it, we need to handle global warming, which is an issue that requires decisively effective renewable energy.

3.      The global population will keep increasing for more decades and ailment will increase as pollution increases. Thus, medical personnel will increase.

4.      Mental health specialists will be needed more than now because the number of people suffering from mental health disorder is on the increase. The causes of mental diseases such as stress and loss of nature will even increase.

5.      Artists will be in higher demand. AI will never produce real arts because they don’t have human mind. As the world gets digitized, humans will appreciate arts more than now.

6.      Comedians and satirists will be precious because machines cannot acquire a sense of humoreven some humans never understand humor. Skills to make humans laugh will never be copied by machines. Hence, humor and jobs to make people laugh will be popular more than now.

 

 

Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

ThesisMainly along the line of Amy and Leon, I think garbage collectors will be higher in demand in that their jobs require a property that robots and AI will never have: care about life.

Supporting DetailsNo matter how much garbage-collection trucks are automated, humans to watch the content of the garbage bin must be present during operation. When something that should not be in a garbage bin such as a baby that is too frail to cry out loud, a body part, or a dead animal is in there, a machine may have no problem executing its task because its purpose is to attain the goal that is programmed in it. Unlike machines, humans can have a hunch for an anomaly in garbage, and unlike machines, humans have a heart to spot and deal with life or a remain of life properly.

Counterargument-treatmentThe demand of garbage collection itself will be undoubtedly high. We cannot live without producing trash and garbage, and the global population is expected to increase until the mid-2080’s.

ConclusionTherefore, garbage collection will be necessary more than ever in the future, and human monitoring of garbage collection will always be in demand.  (193 words)


Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

                                                   DRAFT