2025年11月17日月曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion   A new university in your country - revised -

If your nation were contemplating the construction of a new university, what kind of institution should it envision to best address the evolving demands of our times?

 

 

Let’s Think

1.        What are the main issues of our time?

Note: Climate crisis, nuclear crisis, pandemics, pollutions, wealth gap, white-supremacy and other discriminations, capitalism and neoliberalism, lack of diversity, lack of ethics of technology are some of the main issues of our time.

 

2.        Which issue you named as answers to Question 2 most concerns you? Why?

 

 

Hints for Points

1.     Political Reform: The ruling party, Liberal Democratic Party, has been in power technically continuously since the end of WWII except for a couple of years around 2011 under the Democratic party. This is rare worldwide and problematic as a static political situation leads to corruption. Now the government is in its terminal condition with cronyism and plutocracy, rewarding only the billionaires while exploiting the rest.

 

2.     Food and Water Security: Pursuing the short-time profits and bound by unfair treaties like Japan-US FTA, Japan has been punishing the domestic agriculture. Although the self-sufficiency is generally said to be 40%, Professor Suzuki at the University of Tokyo estimates that it is actually 10% if the import of fertilizer, 99% of which is from China, is taken into account.

 

3.     War: Similarities between the prewar period of Imperial Japan and the current Japanese government and society has been pointed out. It is clear that Japan learned nothing from its past mistakes and sins and is to repeat them in the near future.

 

4.     Climate Change: Global warming impacts not only ecosystems but also politics. It is the urgent issue that could threaten the survival of humanity and the effect is already evident in our country.

 

5.     Aging Society: Tax increase on the working class and increase of non-regular employment have discouraged people from getting married and having children, causing low birthrates. Moreover, the number of immigrants is expected to decrease in the near future because of the depreciation of yen as the Japanese economy and industry deteriorate.

 

6.     Diversity: Hate speech is increasingly pervasive these days. Discrimination against minorities such as foreigners except for white people, LGBTQ, disabled people, and women is stronger than ever. So much so that a political party whose slogan was “Japanese First” won stunningly many sheets in the last election. Kurdish people have been persecuted due to political incitement affected by the Turkish government. Chinese tourists are targeted by envious nationalists who cannot face the reality of Japan has lost economic competition to China, which is now the second largest economy of the world.

 

 

Sample Responses

I would like my country to build a new institution for peace studies. We are in dire need of a university devoted to peaceful coexistence of all kinds of people. As of 2023, we have yet to overcome as humankind our bigotry and discrimination. Hate suffers minorities and dehumanizes all involved. Today’s world is full of crimes, conflicts, and wars, torturing and killing countless number of people, while nobles oblige is lost among those who are less unfortunate. This deterioration of humanity is threatening its continuation as we can see in the recent pandemic and threat of nuclear war. Not only do the perverted activities of haters cause these problems but also they hamper their solutions. Therefore, hate-related phenomena must be studied in an interdisciplinary approach for the whole picture of this issue to stop the predicament of the disadvantaged and prevent any more distress of any human in the future.  (151 words)

 


 

Write your draft on this topic. Show it to each other. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

DRAFT

 

 

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

                                                                                                                                      

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