Writing for Academic Education Should there be age restrictions on university education?

Writing Topic: Should there be age restrictions on university education? (education)

☆Let’s Think

Discuss the topic regarding the following words.

・lifelong learning

・career change　

・equality and access to education

・diverse perspectives　

・budget constraints

 

 

☆Hints for Points

Lifelong Learning: Lifelong learning is the "ongoing, voluntary, and self-motivated" pursuit of learning for either personal or professional reasons. Lifelong learning is important for an individual's competitiveness and employability, but also enhances social inclusion, active citizenship, and personal development. Professions typically recognize the importance of developing practitioners becoming lifelong learners. Many licensed professions mandate that their members continue learning to maintain a license. Lifelong learning institutes are educational organizations specifically for lifelong learning purposes. Informal lifelong learning communities also exist around the world.  ―Wikipeda

 

Career Change: 11% of U.S. adults are considering going back to school for career change. ―Google search

 

Equality and Access to Education: A society must be brought into being in which the people can continue to learn throughout their lives, an all occasions and in all places, and in which they can suitably apply the outcomes of their lifelong learning to refine themselves and lead fulfilling lives. ―Basic Act on Education of Japan, Article 3

 

Diverse Perspectives: Mature students can provide viewpoints that are different from those of young students and help deepen discussions and understanding of the subjects. Older students can also provide younger students with advise on various matters in life in college life.

 

Budget Constraints: Necessary facilities and subjects of interest of elderlies are different from those of young people. Universities may have difficulties in spendingextra resources to meet the needs of older students.

 

 

☆Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

【Thesis】No one is too old to learn, as the cliché goes. A number of adults want to restart learning. Therefore, there should not be age restrictions on university education.

【Supporting Details】Most people keep learning after graduation. Workers constantly need to update their knowledge and skills. Huge corporations have their employees take training courses and Master’s degrees. Homemakers who have finished child-rearing or people who want to change careers may want to resume studies to equip themselves with degrees before going back to work. Also, people who missed the opportunity to go to university for some reason like financial one may want to go to university later in life. Besides, aging society is potentially full of senior citizens who have time and money to return to school. Universities must accommodate the needs.

【Counterargument-treatment】I understand the point of Alex is that needs of young students should be prioritized in using the limited resources of university so that they can get ready to work, and I totally agree with him. However, age restriction in acceptance is another matter. It is age discrimination and unconstitutional in that it violates elderlies’ rights to have a healthy and cultural life and pursue happiness. In terms of resources, universities can take full care of young students without excluding older people from the campus.

【Conclusion】In reality, there can be problems if the number of mature students increase, but this must not be the reason to rid them of the right to learn. (242 words)

 

 

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