2024年12月20日金曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion Reading Fiction or Watching Movies? - revised -

Do you think reading fiction offers more advantages than watching movies? (the arts)

 

 

Lets Think

If you have some time to read fiction or watch a movie, which would you choose to do? Why?

 

 

 Hints for Points

Reading fiction

1.     Novels show what is going on inside humans: thoughts and feelings of a human mind.

2.     Reading develops your imagination.

3.     You will experience and assimilate the author’s mind, often reprograming your mind. In other words, you learn one of the best languages, or best minds, through reading a good novel.

 

Watching movies

1.     Movies inspire you with picture and sound, and this makes the experience more real and special than books do.

2.     Movies will show you what you cannot see in the world you live in.

3.     Going to a theater to see a movie is a special experience.

 

 

Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

Sample A

ThesisI believe reading novels is more advantageous than watching movies because books show what is going on inside the character’s mind more meticulously than movies. It makes you feel as if you were the character, and this is a precious experience that nurture your emotion and power of imagination.

Supporting DetailsFor example, in the suicide scene of “The Heart of the Matter”, the page is filled with the mental agony of a good-natured individual who is depressed from his life as an official in the colonial India and an affair he got involved in there and the description of his gradually dimming conscience and the last moment of its disappearance into the void of death. It is impossible for a movie to have its audience experience this inner drama as precisely as the book does. The book of “The Third Man”, for another instance, describes the decisive moment when the leading character realizes the real face of his old mate, and makes the reader understand the nature of an utter evil, by making the leading character say to himself that the man had never grown since he was a bad boy in their grade school. In the namesake on the screen, the realization of the man’s evilness is shared with the audience through common plots like the absence of the sense of guilt, tragedies of the victims, and the attempt to even shoot the best friend who was trying to help. Although a great movie, it is not so enlightening as the original story.

 ConclusionShowing the internal world of a character is the exclusive territory of novels. If learning about humans and society is the purpose of both fiction books and movies, I think reading fiction beats watching movies exactly for this reason.  (292 words)

 

Sample B

ThesisWhile it is true that reading fiction strengthens imagination as Sam says, the total experience of a movie often overwhelms that of a novel. Therefore, I think watching movies is more advantageous than reading novels.

Supporting DetailsThe power of visuals and sounds of movies easily beats what an individual’s imagination can produce. It has almost the same effect of going abroad or meeting new people in that it takes you to the world that you have never known or imagined. It leaves a new experience in your mind more effectively than reading a story. For example, it is almost impossible for a reader of a foreign novel to construct accurate images of the characters and the setting like landscape or architecture depicted in the novel if the reader has never seen the country and the people. A movie based on the same story shows the closest representations of the characters and the real pictures or authentically recreated environment of the story, and this lets the audience have simulated experiences. The audience go through the narrative witnessing how the characters look in what kind of backgrounds by watching a movie. These experiences from movies are free from poor imaginations produced by an individual’s world, which is relatively smaller than that of a movie. Therefore, the world movies show us are more accurate, more universal, and richer in quality.

ConclusionMovies expose you to the world outside of yourselves more directly and help you grow, so watching movies is more beneficial than reading books in total. (252 words)


Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

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2024年12月18日水曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion An Item Representing My Country - revised -

If you were selected to represent your country, what item would you bring? (cultural studies)

 

 

Lets Think

1.     Think of words and items that represent your country.

2.     Make a presentation of the item you would bring.

 

 

Hints for Points

Words: craftsmanship, neat, well-organized, group-oriented mindset, samurai culture, distinct pop culture, anime, manga, hentai, misogyny, patriarchy, xenophobia, downfall, former colonizer

Items: Toyota car, game machine, karaoke machine, kimono, sushi, flag of Imperial Japan

Points for presentation:

1.        A Toyota car, a Walkman, or a Nintendo game machine can be spotted around the world. These products also symbolize the rise and fall of Japan as an industrialized country.

2.        Sushi or cup-noodle represent the traditional Japanese culture and its interaction with other cultures.

3.        A copy of The Tale of Genji could be the answer because the content is a famous Japanese story that is considered to be the first novel in the world. Manga and anime derive from our love of stories.

 

 

Sample Answers for Ideas and Expressions

Sample 1

A copy of manga could be an object that represents Japan because manga is loved in many countries. Also, the physical characteristics and the existence of a copy of manga reflect the Japanese culture. The neat appearance of manga, the glossy cover and elaborate print, and its drawings, originating from Ukiyo-e woodprint, which often depicts nuances of feelings, are the feature of our culture. The contents are not simple superhero stories but those about life, people, or small things that count in daily life. Also, manga is full of word play, trivia, and other devices coming from the Japanese culture and value. Moreover, putting so much energy into producing just a comic book shows our tendency to be meticulous about rather nonessential or transient things for daily use, as seen in our traditional culture like Japanese dry gardens, which features patterns drawn on the sand. Last but not least, the fact that the word manga has become an English word and that it cannot be exactly replaced with the word comic shows that it is a distinctive part of our culture.

 (181 words)

 

Sample 2

If I were to choose one single object that symbolizes my country, I would choose a katana, Japanese sword. It represents well-known characteristics of Japan: craftsmanship, the samurai culture, and the warlike past.

A katana is said to be the sharpest and strongest sword in the world, and collectors find aesthetic pleasure in it. This indicates our intense devotion to craftsmanship and beauty. Many people find perfectionism and love of details in things we make, ranging from our traditional handicrafts to cutting-edge industrial products to bento lunch with delicately-shaped colorful ingredients neatly arranged in a little lunch box. Our punctual transportation systems and very attentive store clerks also owe their origin to this tendency.

Also, a katana is the item representing our samurai culture, which is known to the world through our old movies. Although carrying katana was made illegal long ago, the samurai culture is still dominant in Japan. Samurai dramas are popular. Business magazines often feature famous Japanese warlords and warriors to learn lessons from their deeds or tactics. Also, many katana-related expressions are alive in our language. To describe a sharp person, we use a direct expression, “kireru,” cuts well. Crisp beer is “kire ga ii,” or cuts in a nice way. Shin-ken means serious, but it also means real, not wooden, katana. Lay-off is “kubi-kiri,” cutting heads off and taking a drastic measure is “itto-ryodan,” cutting in half with a long sword. These and many other katana-related expressions are used daily. It seems that we are always metaphorically wielding katana.

Related to the point above, a katana reminds people of our bloody history. Not only is most of our history the history of warlords, but also it is a historical fact that Japan invaded other countries, torturing and killing their civilians. Nanjin Massacre, the surprise attack on Pearl Harbor, and other atrocities are the histories that we have to keep reflecting on as a people of ex-colonizer. Those who brutally killed women, children, including babies, and old people in other countries with military katana along with modern weapons were not abnormal individuals but average Japanese, who later went home and spent the rest of their lives as ordinary citizens, many of them as family-lovers. This fact shows that we can become ice-cold like a katana in certain situations. Although we are not the only people that have committed atrocities, it is significant that we are one of them.

I do not think all the main features of Japan can be represented by a katana, which is a weapon and therefore has few elements to represent virtues of a people. However, I think our major characteristics, “both militaristic and aesthetic” (Ruth Benedict, The Chrysanthemum and the Sword: patterns of Japanese culture), are symbolized by a Kanata, which is a top-class artwork and is relentlessly sharp. (468 words)


 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

                                                   DRAFT

 

 

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

                                                                                                                          

2024年12月17日火曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion An Item Representing My Country

If you were selected to represent your country, what item would you bring? (cultural studies)

 

 

Lets Think

1.     Think of words and items that represent your country.

2.     Make a presentation of the item you would bring.

 

 

Hints for Points

Words: craftsmanship, neat, well-organized, group-oriented mindset, samurai culture, distinct pop culture, anime, manga, hentai, misogyny, patriarchy, xenophobia, downfall, former colonizer

Items: Toyota car, game machine, karaoke machine, kimono, sushi, flag of Imperial Japan

Points for presentation:

1.        A Toyota car, a Walkman, or a Nintendo game machine can be spotted around the world. These products also symbolize the rise and fall of Japan as an industrialized country.

2.        Sushi or cup-noodle represent the traditional Japanese culture and its interaction with other cultures.

3.        A copy of The Tale of Genji could be the answer because the content is a famous Japanese story that is considered to be the first novel in the world. Manga and anime derive from our love of stories.

 

 

Sample Answers for Ideas and Expressions

Sample 1

A copy of manga could be an object that represents Japan because manga is loved in many countries. Also, the physical characteristics and the existence of a copy of manga reflect the Japanese culture. The neat appearance of manga, the glossy cover and elaborate print, and its drawings, originating from Ukiyo-e woodprint, which often depicts nuances of feelings, are the feature of our culture. The contents are not simple superhero stories but those about life, people, or small things that count in daily life. Also, manga is full of word play, trivia, and other devices coming from the Japanese culture and value. Moreover, putting so much energy into producing just a comic book shows our tendency to be meticulous about rather nonessential or transient things for daily use, as seen in our traditional culture like Japanese dry gardens, which features patterns drawn on the sand. Last but not least, the fact that the word manga has become an English word and that it cannot be exactly replaced with the word comic shows that it is a distinctive part of our culture.

 (181 words)

 

Sample 2

If I were to choose one single object that symbolizes my country, I would choose a katana, Japanese sword. It represents well-known characteristics of Japan: craftsmanship, the samurai culture, and the warlike past

A katana is said to be the sharpest and strongest sword in the world, and collectors find aesthetic pleasure in it. This indicates our intense devotion to craftsmanship and beauty. Many people find perfectionism and love of details in things we make, ranging from our traditional handicrafts to cutting-edge industrial products to bento lunch with delicately-shaped colorful ingredients neatly arranged in a little lunch box. Our punctual transportation systems and very attentive store clerks also owe their origin to this tendency.

Also, a katana is the item representing our samurai culture, which is known to the world through our old movies. Although carrying katana was made illegal long ago, the samurai culture is still dominant in Japan. Samurai dramas are popular. Business magazines often feature famous Japanese warlords and warriors to learn lessons from their deeds or tactics. Also, many katana-related expressions are alive in our language. To describe a sharp person, we use a direct expression, “kireru,” cuts well. Crisp beer is “kire ga ii,” or cuts in a nice way. Shin-ken means serious, but it also means real, not wooden, katana. Lay-off is “kubi-kiri,” cutting heads off and taking a drastic measure is “itto-ryodan,” cutting in half with a long sword. These and many other katana-related expressions are used daily. It seems that we are always metaphorically wielding katana.

Furthermore, a katana reminds people of our bloody history. Not only is most of our history the history of warlords, but also it is a historical fact that Japan invaded other countries, torturing and killing their civilians. Nanjin Massacre, the surprise attack on Pearl Harbor, and other atrocities are the histories that we have to keep reflecting on as a people of ex-colonizer. Those who brutally killed women, children, including babies, and old people in other countries with military katana along with modern weapons were not abnormal individuals but average Japanese, who later went home and spent the rest of their lives as ordinary citizens, many of them as family-lovers. This fact shows that we can become ice-cold like a katana in certain situations. Although we are not the only people that have committed atrocities, it is significant that we are one of them.

I do not think all the main features of Japan can be represented by a katana, which is a weapon and therefore has few elements to represent virtues of a people. However, I think our major characteristics, “both militaristic and aesthetic” (Ruth Benedict, The Chrysanthemum and the Sword: patterns of Japanese culture), are symbolized by a Kanata, which is a top-class artwork and is relentlessly sharp. (464 words)


 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

 

                                                   DRAFT