2023年10月21日土曜日

TOEFL iBT Academic Discussion and Writing Is the overall progress of science a positive or negative force of our world?

Question

Taking a holistic view, do you see the overall progress of science as a positive or negative force of our world?

 

 

Let’s think

Relate the following key words in the professor’s comment:

new frontiers of understanding and capability

ethical, social, and environmental implications to consider

 

For example, the automobile has made us capable of traveling a much longer distance for a certain period of time than before. This has accelerated industrialization (social implication), but it has also caused global warming (an environmental implication). It might also have made drivers have a false sense of omnipotence (an ethical implication).

Note: Not all the three implications have to be named.

 

Hints for points

Key ideas of “new frontiers of understanding and capability”

Science gives us safety, convenience, speed, or precision.

It makes what was impossible before possible.

It gives us new perspectives of the world and humanities.

 

Examples of ethical, social, and environmental implications to consider

-        Weapons of mass destruction like nuclear weapons multiplies deaths tolls.

-        CO2 emissions from cars and factories have caused global warming, which has caused climate crisis, which is causing mass extinction.

-        Manufacturing process and products causes slavery and contaminates rivers and oceans.

-        Privacy is lost through the Internet.

-        Advancement of transportation and communication makes people work more than before.

-        Computer technology makes us sedentary. It also makes us forget some skills like spelling and think less as we can Google the answer before we try to remember or think.

-        Machines raises unemployment rates.

-        Anonymity in social media brings out the worst in humanity.

 

Useful expressions

On the one hand, . On the other hand, …

While it is true that , …

 

Sample Responses

A        I think science is a fundamentally positive force. It protects us from elements and helps us recover from diseases and disasters. It allows us build strong and comfortable shelters and supply ourselves with food and water. Disaster relief is quickly done with heavy machinery. As a result, modern men live a longer and healthier lives than cave men. Science technology also makes our lives richer. Especially, computers and the Internet allows us to increase our knowledge, expand relationships, and have fun. While negative effects of science technology, climate crisis and nuclear threat are now overwhelming our lives, the root cause of these issues are corporate greed and our inertia. Science itself provides us with chances to improve our lives. (120 words)

 

B        Admitting that we all benefit from scientific discoveries and inventions, I am still skeptical of goodness of scientific progress. Yuval Noah Harari says that irrigation technology has deprived us of freedom by making us give up hunting and gathering and start agricultures. In exchange for food security, we lost the life of fun and leisure time and confined ourselves to the care of crops, which is tough and time-consuming. The industrial revolution started confining us to factories and offices and has deprived us of even nature. Enjoying nature has become luxury of the rich. I think today’s stressed-out lives of ours is the extreme result of the advancement of science technology. Now the rhythm of life that machines create like shorter travel time and quicker transactions are often too fast for many humans to keep up with. Those who can adapt themselves to the speed develop mental disorders. Ethically alarming comments which indicate pathetically poor spiritual life that are often heard on today’s media could also be the result of highly technological lifestyle. The power of science technology seems to be driving us to destruction. (186 words)

 


 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

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