2022年9月17日土曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing People are never satisfied with what they have. - revised -

 

Writing Topic

Consider the following statement. People are never satisfied with what they have. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Support your response by including specific reasons and examples.

 

Let’s Think

1.       What is the difference between the following two sentences? Which allows no exceptions?

a.      People are never satisfied with what they have.

b.     People are not always satisfied with what they have.

 

2.       Do you always buy a new model of a product like iPhone whenever it comes out? Why/Why not?

 

3.       When you reach a goal, do you stop challenging the next goal? Why/Why not?

 

Hints for Points

Agree

1.       Greed is limitless.

-        People buy new clothes and goods even though they are still not old.

-        When you have no friends, you imagine just one friend would make your life bright, but when you get a friend, you would want to make friends with different kinds of people.

2.       Desire for the better is in our instinct.

-        Humans have evolved by constantly challenging new goals.

-        You study hard and get a good score. You feel happy, and then you try to get a much better score.

-        We instinctively keep improving ourselves or our environment, because to stop trying means stop moving forward, which is dangerous.

 

Disagree

1.       Through education, we learn to thank for what we already have.

-        All major religions teach the importance of feelings of gratitude and fulfillment, because greed is the source of unhappiness. By giving up desire for what is not yours, you will be free from pains.

-        Most people learn moderation at some point in their lives through their culture or experiences.

2.       What most people want is very modest.

-        This world is made up of a few extremely greedy people who have amassed the wealth which equals to the total wealth of the bottom half of the population. However, most people do not care, as long as they can lead a decent life, that is, having food on the table, having a job they enjoy, being able to have rest and have fun on weekends, and being able to have a family of their own. The greedy are anomaly.

 

 

Sample Essay Structure

Introduction

Point 1

Point 2

Counterargument-treatment

Conclusion 

 

 

 

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