2022年4月10日日曜日

TOEFL iBT Independent Writing Drills 1) Would you like to stay in a foreign country for a year or visit all continents during your sophomore year in your high school? 2) Which is better for you, a high-income family whose parents are too busy to spend time with their children or a low-income family whose parents spend time with their children?

Drill 1  Which of the two answers below is probably more accurate as a response to the following question? How can you improve it? Would you like to stay in a foreign country for a year or visit all continents during your high-school sophomore year?

 

Answer A: I would like to stay in a foreign country for a year rather than visit all continents during my sophomore year in my high school. There are two reasons. First, I would like to study English overseas so that I can get a higher score in the college admissions test. To be fluent in a language, it takes time. Therefore, I need to stay in an English-speaking country for at least a year. Second, I want to make friends with people in a foreign country. Friendship takes time to build. Thus, I would choose a one-year stay.


Answer B: If I stay in a foreign country for a year, I would be able to learn the culture and the language well. I may also be able to become very close to the people there. If lucky, the country would be my second home. On the other hand, if I visit all continents in a year, I would be familiar with a variety of climate types and societies. I would choose the latter because I want to see the world first, and then think about whether to stay in a foreign country for a long time and which country I should stay if I do it later.

 

 

Drill 2  Discuss the following question, write a short essay on it including expressions below, and write comments on or correct mistakes of each other’s essay. Which is better for you, a high-income family whose parents are too busy to spend time with their children or a low-income family whose parents spend time with their children?

 

so that S can …. Sが~できるように

● such as ~ 「例えば~のように」

 

Hints for Points: Parents play an important role in their children’s development. Good memories with parents are treasures of life. Many parents work hard to let their children receive a good education.

 

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