TOEFL, iBT, Independent Writing, The government of your area has announced plans to build a large, new university. Some people think that your community would be a favorable location for the university; others disagree. Compare and discuss the good and bad consequences that might result from building a new university in your community. - rewrite -

Writing Topic

The government of your area has announced plans to build a large, new university. Some people think that your community would be a favorable location for the university; others disagree. Compare and discuss the good and bad consequences that might result from building a new university in your community. Use specific reasons and details to support your essay.

☆Let’s think

This question is made up of two parts: the premise and a direction. The first two sentences provide the premise of this topic, a hypothetical plan to build a large, new university and the two conflicting opinions among the residents on whether to support the plan. The third sentence is the direction. Since it says “compare and discuss the good and bad consequences, dealing with either good or bad points would not be satisfactory.

☆Hints for points

Good Consequences:

1. better access to information (library, audit program, extension school)

2. stimulation to the local economy (shops, apartments, construction of new facilities)

3. influx of young power (events, volunteering, interaction with the local people, younger population)

Bad Consequences:

1. loss of a large area of nature

2. heavier traffic

3. binge drinking

☆Essay Structure

Sample Essay Structure in the case that you have two or three reasons to support your argument

【Introduction = Outline】　The addition seems to have both positive and negative impacts on my society.

【Point 1】A new university would vitalize the economy and the overall morale of our community.

【Point 2】The atmosphere in the community may have some adverse changes.

【Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment】My hometown already has two universities and has few problems.

【Conclusion = Wrap-up】The community would be a little livelier and noisier than now.

♦Your Sample Essay Structure

【Introduction = Outline】

【Point 1】

【Point 2】

【Point 3】

【Conclusion = Wrap-up】

☆Paragraph Development

Sample Paragraph Development

【Main Idea】 The atmosphere in the community may have some adverse changes.

【Transition】 There might be some environmental issues and concern about troublesome behaviors.

【Detail / Example】 For example, part of the large hill would be used to build the campus and a new town for the students and people who work there. The number of automobiles and the amount of garbage would increase. Also, the usual habit of some students such as staying up very late or getting drunk in the street may disturb their neighbors.

【Follow up】 However, most of these behaviors can be forgiven as lack of socialization and students will learn to behave in time. Interaction and communication between the residents and students will be the key.

【Conclusion】 The new university would bring about a loss of nature, which might disrupt the ecology in the area, and some rambunctious students, although this would not matter very much.

♦Your test paragraph development:

【Main Idea】

【Transition】

【Detail / Example】

【Follow up】

【Conclusion】