Writing Topic
Consider the
following statement. E-mail has made communication
between people less personal. Do you agree with this idea? Support your response by
including specific reasons and examples.
☆Let’s Think
E-mail has become so popular that when you say mail you
mean e-mail now. Before e-mail came into popular use-mailing meant sending
letters or post cards. Obviously, these means of communication are generally more
bothersome than e-mail, not to speak of consuming more time and money. It was
easier, faster, and cheaper to communicate in person than by mail before.
Now it seems that e-mail has taken place of much part of
communication. In business, for example, much of it is conducted through, very
often only through, e-mailing. Personal communication seems to have been
affected by this technological change, too. Some think opportunities of
personal communication have reduced because of the frequent use of e-mail.
Others think that people are enjoying their personal communication more than
ever by e-mailing and text messaging.
☆Essay Structure
♦Sample essay
structure in the case that you have two or three reasons to support your
argument
【Introduction = Outline】I cannot
totally agree with the statement that e-mail has made communication between
people less personal because whether
communication between individuals is personal or not seems to be affected not
so much by IT history as by personal history.
【Point 1】The Internet is technically open to everyone. When
you really want to be personal, avoid IT.
【Point 2】When it comes to face-to-face communication,
the total time we spend on it seems to have reduced owing to the development of
e-mail functions. At the same time, it is also often said that e-mails help
people communicate with their family and friends even when they are away from
each other.
【Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment】In terms of
message contents, they seem to have become more personal than before on the
surface, but they might not be really personal.
【Conclusion = Wrap-up】People interact in many ways and e-mail is
only a means of communication, which might not be so powerful as to make
fundamental changes in our communication, while we all feel things are not
really the same as before e-mail was created.
♦Your Sample
Essay Structure
【Introduction = Outline】
【Point 1】
【Point 2】
【Point 3 / Counterargument-treatment】
【Conclusion = Wrap-up】
☆An Essay for Ideas and Expressions
A villain in an old suspense movie―I think it was
Snake Eyes―says, before shooting a
person who had tried to personally warn the US President of a danger, "How
naive you were, trying to contact the President by e-mail!” Even deleting
the extreme case of hacking as in the case of this movie scene, the impression
is that Information Technology has deprived us of the personal area in our
communication. However, I cannot totally agree with the statement that e-mail
has made communication between people less personal. In some cases, e-mail
seems to make personal communication more possible than before. When people
talk about communication and the new technology, the discussions seem to be
made from mainly three perspectives: openness of the
Internet, opportunities for face-to-face communication, and the contents.
They lead me to different conclusions. Yet it also seems to come down to the
view that whether communication between individuals is personal or not seems to
be affected not so much by IT history as by personal history.
The Internet is technically open to everyone. The information on it was meant to be shared by all on the net when it was developed using the public money. Although e-mail is encrypted and, without hacking, its messages stay between individuals, carbon copy (cc) or blind carbon copy (bcc) functions allow the sender to share the message with many people other than the recipient. Also, a moment of lapse can make you unwittingly expose your personal messages to the eyes of countless people. Almost every month, we read about a public figure making a wrong hit and sending a message with an inappropriate expression or picture to everyone on the-mailing list before profusely apologizing to the public and/or forced to retire early. If this discussion can include the services related to e-mail function such as message-board discussion or SNS, the inclusiveness will be almost limitless. It is well-known that personnel managers routinely refer to Twitter or Facebook for the information of job candidates and employees. When you really want to be personal, avoid IT.
When it comes to face-to-face communication,
the total time we spend on it seems to have reduced owing to the development of
e-mail functions. Parents often complain about their children exchanging text
messages with their peers even when they are spending time together with their
family. More often than before, business is done only through exchanges of
e-mails. It is not uncommon that employees in the same company who have never
met or talked with each other have been working together through e-mailing on a
project for years. At the same time, it is also often said that e-mails help
people communicate with their family and friends even when they are away from
each other. You can also receive or send personal messages even while you are
at work or in class. This was impossible before the service was invented.
In terms of message contents, they seem to have become more personal than before the advent of e-mail. Since it is more casual than a letter, an e-mail can be written in very roughly or intimate ways. Also, it can be written and sent more readily than a letter. Again, if you include the evolved forms of e-mail like chat rooms or Twitter, no one is excluded in learning someone else's、often a perfect stranger's, personal matter. People upload their personal opinions, personal pictures, and many other kinds of personal information, which are exposed to the eyes of people all over the world. Even in my personal experience, I have encountered many more personal messages of the people I have never met over the past ten years than I had done in the previous decades clearly because of the introduction of e-mailing services and the same kind of services.
Now, this might be a rather personal view, but
communication between people may not be influenced very much by changes of means
of communication. Personally, I feel that communication is always personal, on
the individual level. As far as I know, when I feel that I am really
communicating with someone, in other words, having an interaction
open-heartedly, I am interacting with one person whether in person or
through some kind of medium. When I interact with more than one person, the
interaction becomes not communication but something theatrical or political. I
feel that I am playing a role, willingly or unwillingly, wearing a persona
prepared by the circumstance I am in. Sometimes, people never hear me whatever
I say or only hear me saying what they want to hear from me. Also, people act
or talk differently when they are alone with me from the way they behave when
they are in a group, and it is in the former that they seem to be really frank
and honest. I guess most people have more or less of the same kind of
experience.
This impression may not be too personal or
unfounded. One professor who studies phenomena happening on the Internet says,
after an overview of an experiment in which students are assigned to talk in
front of the webcam in their bedrooms and send the video message to YouTube
every day, that, although people are showing their very personal sides and talk
about personal matters in the virtual world, they are kind of playing a role,
wearing a face which is very intimate but still made up to be shown to the
public. If this applies to all the personal messages and posts on the web,
strictly speaking, they are not really personal. Humans are social animals, and
thus must be keenly aware, consciously or unconsciously, of the social
side of the Internet. Furthermore, no one, including the sender of a
message, can actually tell whether the person is really making a confession or
not, since our minds are very complex. Therefore, the contents that seem to be
personal might not be really personal.
It is difficult for me to conclude with
certainty that e-mail has made communication between people less personal
because it is difficult to discern what is really going on in today’s
communication. People interact in many ways and e-mail is only a means of
communication, which might not be so powerful as to make fundamental changes in
our communication, while we all feel things are not really the same as before e-mail
was created. In any case, I would never try to contact the US President via e-mail
if I had to personally warn him.
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