2025年11月28日金曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion Is allocating funds ot preserve traditional culture a pritority?

Considering the myriad of urgent needs a nation might have, do you agree or disagree that allocating funds to preserve traditional culture is a priority? Why? Why not?

 

 

Let’s Think

1.        Name traditional Japanese cultures.

e.g Old temples and shrines, kabuki, noh, gagaku, sumi-e, classical Japanese literature, washoku, tea celemony, traditional festivals, etc.

 

2.        Are your answers to Question 2 significant in modern society?

 

 

Hints for Points

Yes

1.        The national identity and the traditional culture are the foundation of our lives.

2.        Humans don’t just live on food. They need mental and spiritual support.

 

No

1.        Pressing issues like climate crisis and nuclear disarmament are to be prioritized.

2.        Protecting the subsistence of all people should always be the top priority.

3.        Saving the poor saves traditional cultures, so the former should be prioritized before the latter.

 

Neither

1.        We should stop spending on military instead.

2.        We can do both based on MMT, which is an economic theory that the government spending can be almost infinitely as long as the currency is owned by the country and inflation is avoided.

 

 

Sample Response

Sample 1: Preservation of the traditional culture should be a priority because it protects being human as well as the identity of the people. Traditional culture shows what the people is and what is human. Through learning traditional culture and learning how our ancestors ate, dressed, sang, danced, celebrated, or said farewell to the deceased, we understand what is in the core of our existence and see what is the true priority in our life. Modern life is homogenized and it dehumanizes us. We live and work in comfortable but tasteless buildings, wear functional but plain clothes, and are fed with impressive and beautiful enough but not stunning or heart-wrenching art, music, or movies in this world controlled by capitalism. As a result, we now have deteriorated to the point where we consume others’ private lives, tragedy, or catastrophe as the medium for stress release or sublimation because modern culture doesn’t fulfill our spiritual hunger. In other words, modern culture is barbaric and perverse. To rediscover and restore humanity, we need to consult what our ancestors left. Traditional culture is the treasure trove for this purpose. Therefore, I agree with prioritizing preservation of it. (192 words)

 

Sample 2: I agree with Kristy’s point that protecting traditional cultures is important to maintain a sense of identity and continuity, and I think it is all the more imperative to spend resources on ensuring the continuity of the communities that sustain traditional cultures. Today’s major issues are so pressing that the doomsday clock is now set at less than 90 seconds to midnight, meaning the extinction of the human race can occur at any moment. We need to allocate a large part of our budget to avoid catastrophes such as nuclear war, effects of climate crisis, and disruptions by artificial intelligence. To solve these problems, intentional budget-allocation is necessary, while traditional cultures are organically protected as long as the people exists. Especially, the impact of climate change and wars are wiping out minority cultures at this very moment, while the cultures of the wealthy are well protected. For instance, the islanders of Tuvalu are forced to leave their island due to the sea level rise, while Vienna in Austria is dealing well with flood impacts thanks to the abundant technical and financial support. As a result, the traditional cultures of Tuvalu are lost, while those of Vienna are saved. Palestinian cultures being lost in the genocide by the colonizer Israel, whose raison d’être is supposed to protect its own tradition, is another but significant example. It is vital that financial supports on the subsistence of the marginalized come first.  (238 words)


 

Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

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2025年11月23日日曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion Has technology in education enhanced the learning experience? - revised -

Do you believe that the integration of technology in education has overall enhanced the learning experience for students? Why? Why not?

 

 

Let’s think

1         Have you ever used any of the following in your studies? How much do you think you learned with it?

YouTube video   language-learning app   generative AI (e.g. ChatGPT)

 

2         Have you ever experienced enhancement of your ability by using any of the following technologies?

3         learning practical skills like dancing or drawing pictures 

information search and other skills to widen your views.

memorization, learning languages, preparing for an examination, and other learning to increase knowledge

critical thinking, such as coming up with ideas for a writing assignment

 

 

Reference

"Universities are embracing AI: will students get smarter or stop thinking?  

Millions of students arriving at campuses are now using artificial intelligence. Worries abound.

 

... To some, AI presents an exciting opportunity to improve education and prepare students for a rapidly changing world. Universities such as Tsinghua and Ohio State are already weaving AI into their teaching — and some studies hint that AI-powered tools can help students to learn. A randomized controlled trial involving physics undergraduates at Harvard University in Cambridge, Massachusetts, suggested that those who used a custom-built AI tutor learnt more in less time than did students who were taught by humans alone.

 

But many education specialists are deeply concerned about the explosion of AI on campuses: they fear that AI tools are impeding learning because they’re so new that teachers and students are struggling to use them well. Faculty members also worry that students are using AI to short-cut their way through assignments and tests, and some research hints that offloading mental work in this way can stifle independent, critical thought.”   By Helen Pearson (“Nature” on 21 October, 2025)

 

 

Hints for Points


Yes

1.        Educational materials and sites help students understand subjects more effectively than before.

2.        Information search and comparison of multiple materials have become more efficient than before.

 

No

1.        Fewer students have the ability to read complicated materials than before because most students do not read books anymore as they learn from apps and social media.

2.        Many students learn less than before because they copy and paste information.


 

Sample Responses

Sample 1  I agree with Fione’s point that technology democratized education by enhancing accessibility to information and other resources and would like to elaborate on it. Information Technology has made information search and comparison of multiple materials efficient than before. It now allows us to get necessary information for studies anytime and anywhere. It is no longer necessary to go to the library or bookstores to find related materials as Google search provides numerous sources, including newspapers and magazines, instantly. Even when a certain book is necessary, ordering from online bookstores allows us to download a copy in a few seconds or have it sent within a day or two. As Taylor says, the distraction of social media can offset the time earned by this efficiency, but it was epoch-making that information technology has made it physically efficient to collect good materials. In the end, learning depends on the individual’s concentration and IT definitely has facilitated our learning. (156 words)

 

Sample 2  With reservation, I’m also concerned about the fragmentation of attention like Taylor. Integration of information technology and education has inundated the workstation with infinite and constant flows of distractors like notices or news feed, which can keep students away from work till they lose track of their researches and thoughts. Insights and inspiration require certain amount of time for the brain to work on the subject undisturbed by the unrelated factors, but work on the screen never allows it. Especially, time for reading on the tablet gets fragmented and this directly affects the quality of reading. It is like a disturbed sleep. Even if the total length of the activity is the same, the highest point of the brain activity cannot often be reached in disturbed reading. Meanwhile, younger generations are tech-savvy and multitaskers, and they might not be so distracted by the incessant assault of notices and alerts as to lose sight of the tasks they are working on. They might even be able to advantage of the state of mind that is constantly open to the online exposure, sorting out and processing information they get simultaneously, and get the task done better reflecting the sense of reality they get from the process. In short, students’ attention span and concentration may have been affected while adaptation may have been occurring among young users. (224 words)


 

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2025年11月21日金曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion Has technology in education enhanced the learning experience? - revised -

Do you believe that the integration of technology in education has overall enhanced the learning experience for students? Why? Why not?

 

 

Let’s think

1         Have you ever used any of the following in your studies? How much do you think you learned with it?

YouTube video   language-learning app   generative AI (e.g. ChatGPT)

 

2         Have you ever experienced enhancement of your ability by using any of the following technologies?

3         learning practical skills like dancing or drawing pictures 

information search and other skills to widen your views.

memorization, learning languages, preparing for an examination, and other learning to increase knowledge

critical thinking, such as coming up with ideas for a writing assignment

 

 

Reference

Universities are embracing AI: will students get smarter or stop thinking?  

Millions of students arriving at campuses are now using artificial intelligence. Worries abound.

 

“To some, AI presents an exciting opportunity to improve education and prepare students for a rapidly changing world. Universities such as Tsinghua and Ohio State are already weaving AI into their teaching — and some studies hint that AI-powered tools can help students to learn. A randomized controlled trial involving physics undergraduates at Harvard University in Cambridge, Massachusetts, suggested that those who used a custom-built AI tutor learnt more in less time than did students who were taught by humans alone.

 

But many education specialists are deeply concerned about the explosion of AI on campuses: they fear that AI tools are impeding learning because they’re so new that teachers and students are struggling to use them well. Faculty members also worry that students are using AI to short-cut their way through assignments and tests, and some research hints that offloading mental work in this way can stifle independent, critical thought.”   By Helen Pearson (“Nature” on 21 October, 2025)

 

 

Hints for Points


Yes

1.        Educational materials and sites help students understand subjects more effectively than before.

2.        Information search and comparison of multiple materials have become more efficient than before.

 

No

1.        Fewer students have the ability to read complicated materials than before because most students do not read books anymore as they learn from apps and social media.

2.        Many students learn less than before because they copy and paste information.


 

 

Sample Responses

Sample 1  I think information Technology has enhanced our learning experience mainly because it has made information search and comparison of multiple materials efficient than before. It now allows us to get necessary information for studies anytime and anywhere. This has made it unnecessary to go to the library or bookstores to find related materials. Google search provides numerous sources, including newspapers and magazines, instantly. Even when a certain book is necessary, ordering from online bookstores allows us to download a copy in a few seconds or have it sent within a day or two. As Taylor says, the distraction of social media can offset the time earned by this efficiency, but the fact that information technology has made it physically efficient to collect good materials won’t change. In the end, learning depends on the individual’s concentration and IT definitely facilitates learning. (140 words)

 

Sample 2  With reservation, I’m also concerned about the fragmentation of attention. Integration of information technology and education exposed the workstation to infinite and constant flows of distractors like notices or news feed, which can keep students away from work till they lose track of their researches and thoughts. Insights and inspiration require certain amount of time for the brain to work on the subject undisturbed by the unrelated factors, but work on the screen never allows it. Especially, time for reading on the tablet gets fragmented and this directly affects the quality of reading. It is like a disturbed sleep. Even if the total length of the activity is the same, the highest point of the brain activity cannot often be reached in disturbed reading. However, Gen Z are tech-savvy and multitaskers. They might not be so distracted by the incessant assault of notices and alerts as to lose sight of the tasks they are working on. They might even be taking advantage of the state of mind that is constantly open to the online world, sorting out and processing information they get, and get the task done utilizing the sense of reality they get from the process. Therefore, I conclude that attention span may have become short without intentionally constant intensive reading, while free working of mind may have been maintained even when our minds are constantly online. (228 words)


 

Write your draft on this topic. Show it to each other. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

DRAFT