2025年11月15日土曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion   A new university in your country - revised -

If your nation were contemplating the construction of a new university, what kind of institution should it envision to best address the evolving demands of our times?

 

 

Let’s Think

1.        What are the main issues of our time?

Note: Climate crisis, nuclear crisis, pandemics, pollutions, wealth gap, white-supremacy and other discriminations, capitalism and neoliberalism, lack of diversity, lack of ethics of technology are some of the main issues of our time.

 

2.        Which issue you named as answers to Question 2 most concerns you? Why?

 

 

Hints for Points

1.     Political Reform: The ruling party, Liberal Democratic Party, has been in power technically continuously since the end of WWII except for a couple of years around 2011 under the Democratic party. This is rare worldwide and problematic as a static political situation leads to corruption. Now the government is in its terminal condition with cronyism and plutocracy, rewarding only the billionaires while exploiting the rest.

 

2.     Food and Water Security: Pursuing the short-time profits and bound by unfair treaties like Japan-US FTA, Japan has been punishing the domestic agriculture. Although the self-sufficiency is generally said to be 40%, Professor Suzuki at the University of Tokyo estimates that it is actually 10% if the import of fertilizer, 99% of which is from China, is taken into account.

 

3.     War: Similarities between the prewar period of Imperial Japan and the current Japanese government and society has been pointed out. It is clear that Japan learned nothing from its past mistakes and sins and is to repeat them in the near future.

 

4.     Climate Change: Global warming impacts not only ecosystems but also politics. It is the urgent issue that could threaten the survival of humanity and the effect is already evident in our country.

 

5.     Aging Society: Tax increase on the working class and increase of non-regular employment have discouraged people from getting married and having children, causing low birthrates. Moreover, the number of immigrants is expected to decrease in the near future because of the depreciation of yen as the Japanese economy and industry deteriorate.

 

6.     Diversity: Hate speech is increasingly pervasive these days. Discrimination against minorities such as foreigners except for white people, LGBTQ, disabled people, and women is stronger than ever. So much so that a political party whose slogan was “Japanese First” won stunningly many sheets in the last election. Kurdish people have been persecuted due to political incitement affected by the Turkish government. Chinese tourists are targeted by envious nationalists who cannot face the reality of Japan has lost economic competition to China, which is now the second largest economy of the world.

 

 

Sample Responses

I would like my country to build a new institution for peace studies. We are in dire need of a university devoted to peaceful coexistence of all kinds of people. As of 2023, we have yet to overcome as humankind our bigotry and discrimination. Hate suffers minorities and dehumanizes all involved. Today’s world is full of crimes, conflicts, and wars, torturing and killing countless number of people, while nobles oblige is lost among those who are less unfortunate. This deterioration of humanity is threatening its continuation as we can see in the recent pandemic and threat of nuclear war. Not only do the perverted activities of haters cause these problems but also they hamper their solutions. Therefore, hate-related phenomena must be studied in an interdisciplinary approach for the whole picture of this issue to stop the predicament of the disadvantaged and prevent any more distress of any human in the future.  (151 words)

 


 

Write your draft on this topic. Show it to each other. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

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2025年11月7日金曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion To do what you dong enjoy once in a while or to focus on what you like? - revised -

Is it more beneficial for individuals to sometimes engage in activities they might not enjoy or to solely focus on endeavors that bring them joy?

 

 

Let’s think

1.        Do you sometimes eat what you don’t usually eat, try a sport or game you don’t usually play, or talk with people that you don’t usually talk to? Why/Why not?

 

2.        If you had a child now, which educational policy would you exercise, having them sometimes do what they don’t enjoy or letting them focus only on what they enjoy doing? Why?

 

3.        If a person who doesn’t like math and science wants to be a doctor, should the person try to study math or find a different goal?

 

 

Hints for points

Sometimes doing what you don’t enjoy doing

1.      A good medicine tastes bitter.

2.      By trying what is not attractive to you, you find something new about yourself like a talent.

3.      There might be a discovery like a new culture.

4.      It can lead to personal growth through overcoming weakness, gaining confidence, or experiencing something new.

 

Focusing on activities that you can enjoy making efforts for

1.      What one likes, one will do well.

2.      Stress is harmful.

3.      People can become truly happy by doing what is true to their nature.

4.      People who are doing what they don’t like tend to become narrow-minded and mean, hating those who are happy and enjoying themselves.

 

 

Sample Responses (Counterargument-treatment underlined)

A        By doing things that you do not enjoy doing, you can be more aware of the reality you live in, and this will provide you with true joy of life. We humans tend to cocoon ourselves from the assault of harsh reality, even if it could be depriving us of good experiences and precious awakening. We avoid interacting with obnoxious individuals, who might have become less hardened or with whom we may have empathy as a result of our own maturity. We listen to music, read writings, and watch movies we already know well, staying ignorant of most of what is in the world. Some people never read novels or spend a day cut off from the outside world, not knowing the spiritual satisfaction and insight in life that self-seclusion provides. Other people never interact with immigrants and miss the experience of major issues in humanities that gives them dramatic emotions deeper and different from tiny, daily joys. We cherry pick reality and try to believe that everything is all right. This psychological defense mechanism is a trap that makes us conceited and out of touch, because the reality is always there regardless of what we want to believe it to be. Thus, doing what you don’t enjoy doing once in a while will help you break the bubble you are in, face the reality, and get a real life by actively committing yourself to the reality. Of course, you do not always have to be alert, which is stressful. However, you need to update your reality once in a while by hopping out of your comfort zone so that you will not get lost in the journey of your life.

(282 words)

 

B        I don’t think it is beneficial to do what you don’t enjoy doing, unless it is your duty. Rather, focusing on what you like so much as to make you forget time doing it will make you and your society happy. Each individual is born with natural characteristics such as palate, aptitude, and capability. They are unchangeable and determine our ability and behavior. So doing activities we naturally tend to choose or actively get engaged in is the most productive as they are naturally most suitable to our health and happiness. For instance, a mathematician or an artist can keep doing their job non-stop because of their extreme concentration on their vocation. So much so that they often forget or dismiss consuming food and starve themselves. Making these people do what is not their cup of tea is nothing but a waste. More or less, the same can be said about all people. All individuals are born to enjoy their lives and therefore, we should nurture ourselves in the area where our nature fits into. Doing what you like is the best way to bring the best out of you. (191 words)

 

 

 


 

Write your draft on this topic. Show it to each other. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

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Writing for an Academic Discussion To do what you dong enjoy once in a while or to focus on what you like? - revised -

Is it more beneficial for individuals to sometimes engage in activities they might not enjoy or to solely focus on endeavors that bring them joy?

 

 

Let’s think

1.        If you had children now, which educational policy would you exercise, having them sometimes do what they don’t enjoy or letting them focus only on what they enjoy doing? Why?

 

2.        Do you sometimes eat what you don’t usually eat, play a sport or game you don’t usually play, or talk with people that you don’t usually talk to? Why/Why not?

 

 

Hints for points

Sometimes doing what you don’t enjoy doing

1.     You find something new about yourself like a talent.

2.     There might be a discovery like a new culture.

3.     It can lead to personal growth through overcoming weakness and gaining confidence.

 

Focusing on activities that you can enjoy making efforts for

1.     What one likes, one will do well.

2.     Stress is harmful.

3.     People can become truly happy by doing what is true to their nature.

 

 

Sample Responses

A        By doing things that you do not enjoy doing, you can be more aware of the reality you live in, and this will provide you with true joy of life. We humans tend to cocoon ourselves from the assault of harsh reality, even if it could be depriving us of good experiences and precious awakening. We avoid interacting with obnoxious individuals, who might have become less hardened or with whom we may have empathy as a result of our own maturity. We listen to music, read writings, and watch movies we already know well, staying ignorant of most of what is in the world. Some people never read novels or spend a day cut off from the outside world, not knowing the spiritual satisfaction and insight in life that self-seclusion provides. Other people never interact with immigrants and miss the experience of major issues in humanities that gives them dramatic emotions deeper and different from tiny, daily joys. We cherry pick reality and try to believe that everything is all right. This psychological defense mechanism is a trap that makes us conceited and out of touch, because the reality is always there regardless of what we want to believe it to be. Thus, doing what you don’t enjoy doing once in a while will help you break the bubble you are in, face the reality, and get a real life by actively committing yourself to the reality. Of course, you do not always have to be alert, which is stressful. However, you need to update your reality once in a while by hopping out of your comfort zone so that you will not get lost in the journey of your life.

(282 words)

 

B        I don’t think it is beneficial to do what you don’t enjoy doing, unless it is your duty. Rather, focusing on what you like so much as to make you forget time doing it will make you and your society happy. Each individual is born with natural characteristics such as palate, aptitude, and capability. They are unchangeable and determine our ability and behavior. So doing activities we naturally tend to choose or actively get engaged in is the most productive as they are naturally most suitable to our health and happiness. For instance, a mathematician or an artist can keep doing their job non-stop because of their extreme concentration on their vocation. So much so that they often forget or dismiss consuming food and starve themselves. Making these people do what is not their cup of tea is nothing but a waste. More or less, the same can be said about all people. All individuals are born to enjoy their lives and therefore, we should nurture ourselves in the area where our nature fits into. Doing what you like is the best way to bring the best out of you. (191 words)

 

 

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Write your draft on this topic. Show it to each other. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

DRAFT