2024年5月18日土曜日

Writing for an Academic Discussion How to use a substantial plot of land for development to meed the needs of society

Question: What do you think is the best way to develop a substantial plot of land which the government of your community has the freedom to develop in any manner it sees fit, considering the current needs of society and how different types of development could impact the society?

 

 

Discussion

1.     Which of the following three responses to this do you think is the least proper? Why?

A)      I would sell it to buy whatever I want.

B)      I would build an amusement park on the land.

C)      I would make it a refugee camp which can help refugees (to) become independent.

Note: Response A) is not a way to develop land. Response B) is a way to develop land but it is not clear if it meets the current needs of society. C) meets the need of society because refugee crises are occurring in many parts of the world now, and building a refugee camp help soften the crises, The heart of the question is thinking about a way to use a huge area of land, which is something that provides space, soil, ecological system, the atmosphere above it, life and joy, and many other things that we can take advantage of.

 

2.     What are the current needs of society, and how can the land be developed to make a difference to meet the needs of society?

 

 

Hints for Points

a huge air purifier/water tank/vegetable garden/nature park  a factory to manufacture facilities of micropower generation  a repair factory of electronics

a free cafeteria/food bank/daycare center/evacuation center  an area without commercial facilities 

a shelter for refugees/the homeless/stray animals an independent radio station/TV station

a hospital/school/library/museum/botanical garden/ballpark/theater/concert hall

 

 

Presentation

1.     Make a presentation to your partner or group members on your response to today’s question by answering the following questions.

 

1)     What is one of the current needs or issues of society? What is its present situation?

e.g. It is refugee crisis. There are 35.5 million refugees in the world now. They are in desperate situations and need support.

 

2)     How would you use the land to change the situation?

e.g. I would make the land a refugee camp so that refugees can live a healthy and cultural life by providing support and helping them (to) become independent.

 

3)     What are the advantages of it? 

e.g. It would save many lives. It would also enrich cultures of my own society.

 

4)     What problem can you expect, and how would you address it?

e.g. Some local residents might not be happy about accepting refugees, but we accepted some refugees in the past during a refugee crisis in Asia, and we can cope with this problem by learning from what we did then. Also, we must make sure that refugees will be able to return home as soon as possible.

 

2.     Ask each other questions about each other’s presentations. This will help (to) make your essays more interesting.

 

 

Sample response

I would use the land to help escape refugee crisis. There are 35.5 million refugees around the world now. They have fled or lost their homes due to overwhelming events such as conflicts, oppressions, and disasters. They are in desperate situations, including threat of their lives. and need support. Therefore, I would make the land a refugee camp and provide support to help them (to) become independent so that they can live a healthy and cultural life. It would save many lives. A possible problem would be that some local residents might not be happy about accepting refugees. However, we accepted some refugees in the last refugee crisis in the last century, and we can cope with this problem by learning from what we did then. Also, we must make sure that refugees will be able to return home as soon as possible.

(142 words)

 

 

 

 


Write your response in 10 minutes. Show each other your responses. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s response.

 

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