☆Response for Ideas and Expressions
We cannot use basic internet services such
as social media, online subscriptions, and online shopping without giving up
some of our digital privacy. Especially, free services are provided in exchange
for our personal information. When we make an account of a social media, for
instance, we type in our name, e-mail address, and some other personal
information. The company that provides the free service sells the information we
gave it as a commodity to other companies seeking potential customers. Then a
few days later, we start getting e-mail ads from shops we do not know. It is
somewhat inconvenient to sort out the mailbox full of ads, but we cannot help
using the services to stay informed, communicate, and do other activities,
although we need to be careful about protecting our lives and financial data.
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