2016年11月19日土曜日

Pre-TOEFL writing, All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school.

Writing Topic
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Give specific reasons to support your answer.

Note
Secondary schools are junior high school and high school.

Hints for Points
1.    Habit to enjoy good art and music should be maintained through all education years.
2.    Secondary school students should be given chances to expand their world as much as possible.
3.    Art and music should be optional in secondary school.
4.    Some may enjoy drawing pictures while they may feel horrified by the thought of singing in class.

Sample Development
1. Art and music should be optional in secondary school. The basics of art and music are taught at primary school and students already know their aptitudes. They can decide whether taking these subjects will benefit them or not. Both art and music are for the joy of life and it is putting the cart before the horse to force students to learn them. Therefore, they should be given a choice.

2. Secondary school students should be given chances to expand their world as much as possible. Those who had no interest in art and music in primary school may open their eyes to either or both of these subjects in secondary school. Then the school should provide opportunities to experience the finest pieces humans make when one is ready to appreciate them.


♦Your Sample Essay Structure
Introduction = Outline

Point 1


Point 2


Point 3 / Follow-up


Conclusion = Wrap-up


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