2025年2月24日月曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion The most important factors in making an advertisement effective - revised -

What do you think are some of the most important factors in making an advertisement effective?  (marketing)

 

 

Lets Think

1.        What are the purposes of advertising?

 

Purposes of advertising: to raise brand awareness or name recognition, to increase sales, to attract new customers, to build brand loyalty, etc.

 

2.        Think of advertisements that you like or remember well. Why do you like or remember them well?

Which of the following factors appealed to you? Were there any other factors that appealed to you?

 

Factors: visuals, sound (jingles, music, and songs), advertising copy or catch copy, people and characters, the story, the dream, sense of humor, atmosphere, timing, the space the advertisement is placed, information of the product or service, etc.

 

 

Hints for Points

1.        Word-of-mouth advertising is said to be the most effective advertising. Making customers satisfied leads to confidence in the store, brand name, product, or service.

2.        Consumers often buy the good image of a brand created by advertising.

3.        Consumers also buy a dream projected by an ad of a product.

4.        Celebrities are paid much for an ad. This means that using famous people is effective.

5.        Ads placed in or on a space where people often see is advantageous in exposure. Social media ads, ads in train cars, and ads on huge screens in front of a big station are some of the examples.

6.        Good music attract attention, connect what is advertised to the music, and make it a reminder.

7.        Impactful jingles get stuck in your heard. Children learn jingles and remember the brand name.

8.        Impressive copies like Nike’s slogan “Just Do It” makes the brand name known forever.

 

 

Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

ThesisI think attracting attention, fascinating, and causing loyalty are some of the most effective factors in successful advertisements, which are seen in a powerful advertising method called product placement.

Supporting DetailsProduct placement is a method of advertisement that places, or uses, a product in a TV show or a movie as a prop with the logo facing the camera. It is so effective that uses of the method on some products are banned. For example, tobacco is not allowed to appear in TV and films in some countries now. If you see old movies, you will be surprised to find everyone smoking and even be fascinated with the cool and decadent ways the actors used to smoke. This fascination taps into the subconscious layer of your mind. The good experience and the image relate to the item and make you learn the product name, make you buy one, and make you a loyal customer.

Counterargument-treatmentNow that this method of advertising has become notorious and it is even mentioned as a joke, it might not be so effective as before. But it is still often the case that TV stations get inquiries about a certain item after a celebrity carried it in a show, and people still try to buy fashion items that celebrities uploaded onto their social media accounts and have hair-cuts of their favorite star.

ConclusionRecognition, fascination, and loyalty are some of the main factors of the most effective advertisement, as seen in product placement. (245 words)


 

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Writing for Academic Discussion The most important factors in making an advertisement effective - revised -

What do you think are some of the most important factors in making an advertisement effective?  (marketing)

 

 

Lets Think

1.        What are the purposes of advertising?

 

Purposes of advertising: to raise brand awareness or name recognition, to increase sales, to attract new customers, to build brand loyalty, etc.

 

2.        Think of advertisements that you like or remember well. Why do you like or remember them well?

Which of the following factors appealed to you? Were there any other factors that appealed to you?

 

Factors: visuals, sound (jingles, music, and songs), advertising copy or catch copy, people and characters, the story, the dream, sense of humor, atmosphere, timing, the space the advertisement is placed, information of the product or service, etc.

 

 

Hints for Points

1.        Word-of-mouth advertising is said to be the most effective advertising. Making customers satisfied leads to confidence in the store, brand name, product, or service.

2.        Celebrities are paid much for an ad. This means that using famous people is effective.

3.        Ads placed in or on a space where people often see is advantageous in exposure. Social media ads, ads in train cars, and ads on huge screens in front of a big station are some of the examples.

4.        Good music attract attention, connect what is advertised to the music, and make it a reminder.

5.        Impactful jingles get stuck in your heard. Children learn jingles and remember the brand name.

6.        Impressive copies like Nike’s slogan “Just Do It” makes the brand name known forever.

 

 

Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

ThesisI think attracting attention, fascinating, and causing loyalty are some of the most effective factors in successful advertisements, which are seen in a powerful advertising method called product placement.

Supporting DetailsProduct placement is a method of advertisement that places, or uses, a product in a TV show or a movie as a prop with the logo facing the camera. It is so effective that uses of the method on some products are banned. For example, tobacco is not allowed to appear in TV and films in some countries now. If you see old movies, you will be surprised to find everyone smoking and even be fascinated with the cool and decadent ways the actors used to smoke. This fascination taps into the subconscious layer of your mind. The good experience and the image relate to the item and make you learn the product name, make you buy one, and make you a loyal customer.

Counterargument-treatmentNow that this method of advertising has become notorious and it is even mentioned as a joke, it might not be so effective as before. But it is still often the case that TV stations get inquiries about a certain item after a celebrity carried it in a show, and people still try to buy fashion items that celebrities uploaded onto their social media accounts and have hair-cuts of their favorite star.

ConclusionRecognition, fascination, and loyalty are some of the main factors of the most effective advertisement, as seen in product placement. (245 words)


 

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2025年2月17日月曜日

Writing for Academic Discussion Grades for Elementary School Students - revised -

Writing Topic: Should grades for elementary school students be abolished or continued?  (education)

 

 

Lets Think

1.        Read the following words of Einstein and share the examples related to grading, school education, or school life.

“Not everything that can be counted counts and not everything that counts can be counted.”

 

2.        What are the advantages and disadvantages of grading?

 

 

Hints for Points

Advantages

1.        Mostly accurate, objective, and fair.

2.        Grading system helps children see their weak points and strong points. It also shows how much progress they have made.

3.        Grades help children which subject they should work more and how much they should do it.

4.        Grades can motivate them children who enjoy competition to work hard.

5.        Grades can help children find jobs for them.

 

Disadvantages

1.        Numbers do not always reflect how well a child works. For example, some children solve questions quickly although they make many mistakes, while other children solve questions slowly although they hardly ever make a mistake. Since tests are timed, the former types of children tend to get higher scores than the latter types of children.

2.        Evaluation can be a stress and can make children lose interest in the subjects, especially when they keep getting low marks.

3.        Both children and teachers will focus on raising scores rather than real learning. For instance, they can spend more time on learning spells rather than practicing reading and writing skills in language classes.

 

 

Sample Answer for Ideas and Expressions

ThesisAs Samantha points out, grading can prevent real learning, but I would like to play the devil’s advocate and claim that grading performances of children at elementary school should be continued because grading can help them find their aptitude and take a right course for their future, facilitating society to function.

Supporting DetailsSociety is made up of people, and therefore, whether it functions rightly depends on the happiness and job performances of each individual. Grading helps individuals objectively overview their ability in each field. Thus, it helps children see how much they fit in each field and know which field is the best to choose for a fulfilling life if they reach the full potential of it, or vice versa. Early detection of academic tendency will help children have a kick start of their training in their strongest areas, avoiding time loss of making efforts on jobs they are not cut out for. In this way, most members of society have jobs suitable to their ability and their sound and happy adult life will contribute to building and maintaining a good society.

ReservationOf course, self-realization is related to many other factors such as likings, passion, and personal history, but property plays a huge part of a person’s performances, and taking a wrong course will cost too much to compensate for. Grades are vital as a compass of life-planning to reduce the number of individuals taking a wrong course.

ConclusionIn order for children to prepare for a life with little regret in career choice and for society to continue, grades at elementary school are necessary.

 (263 words)


Write your draft in about 10 minutes. Show each other your drafts. Write down questions or suggestions to each other’s draft.

 

 

 

 

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